All Comments on 'Whole New Slave Game Ch. 01'

Hope it's 10 chapters long. Keep writing you'll really piss off the asshole of LIT, dear annony!

You have to write this one through to the end. It starts out every bit as good as everything you have done. You have our attention please continue.

I've been waiting for this for two years. I hope you continue. I enjoyed every chapter the Lottery. More PLEASE

More please. Every time I see your screen name I look to see if there is more. This is one of the best Voluntary slave stories ever.

Despite the anonymous critic, I am working on it. The finished piece will be long and I have to be pretty sure about the details in the ending before I start putting chapters up. One has to do the best one can not to write oneself into a corner.

I have decided to ignore anonymous critics, so don't bother to write something stupid unless you are least willing to put down your Literotica name.

Enjoy all your stories. Please finish this one here or at least tell us where we can buy it.

It will be long. I hope some people will like it or I will have wasted a lot of time.

I hope to start putting up chapters in a couple weeks. After that, things should move quickly.

Let's see the next.

2 stars only, for the moment.