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Click hereI slipped out of my dress and let it fall to the ground. I had on a black bra and black thong. I leaned over his bed, ass in the air and looked back at him. Mitch chuckled and said "what you don't understand is your position here. "You are my sex kitten, you fuck who I want, when I want, how I want." I unclasped my bra. "I have been very patient with you so far, but that ends now." I slid my thong down and bent back over so he had a clear view of my ass and pussy. Mitch unzipped and pulled his dick out. "Suck it, now." I got on my knees in front of him and took his hard 7" dick in my mouth. His cock in my mouth felt so right. The power I felt from his cock overwelmbed all other thoughts.I continued to suck as he reached down and fondled my tits. He moved me to the bed and placed me face down. He positioned himself behind me and slowly started running the head of his dick over my pussy. "Do you want me to fuck you?" He asked?
"No!" I said.
With a loud smack he slapped my ass.
"Do you want me to fuck you?" He repeated.
"Yes." I moaned.
"Yes please." He barked.
"Please fuck me." I asked him.
Then he shoved his dick inside me. He pumped me for 30 minutes in the same position then came inside me. He then made me finger myself until he got hard again. He had me suck on his dick until he got close to cumming then he he started fingering me. He fucked me again and again that night. Each time he put his dick in me I felt more certain, All I wanted was his cum.
Mitch made me show him the videos I had taken and that I planned to send them to Joan from HR. He had a good laugh at Tom's. At the end of the night I was exhausted and covered in cum. Mitch set up a video call with Joan. I was still naked on the bed covered in his cum. "Hey Joan, just wanted to call and say how great Laura is working out." Mitch said with me naked in the shot.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoA lot of twists and turns here. You had me guessing where this would end up. Revenge against boorish, pathetic males or an eventual release into sexual depravity ... becoming a willing slut. Will send more detailed feedback to your Outlook. 🙂
Laurabentoverabout 5 years agoAuthorThanks for the feed back. Sorry you did not like the direction I took. Honestly I just write whatever turns me on the most. Certainly you have my permission to re-write your own with a different ending.
I do sincerely appreciate any and all constructive feed back. Laurabentover@outlook.com
Anonymousabout 5 years agoNormally, I like my bimbofication smut simple and in its place. This story left me thirsting for righteousness comeuppance. Literally and sexually speaking this piece had a promising start. For me the piece started its downward spiral toward its disappointing death around the lezy action. I took actual interst again when the herione started her revenge plot. Which normally ruins a bimbofication story for me. I really don't know why but was really hoping she'd end up on top so to speak. Id live to see a rewrite or heck I'd even like permission to take this story and give it the ending I wanted. Not really sure about writers etiquette here since im really just a reader.
( and excuse my thirsty use of literary terminology its been a long time since i tried to write anything with style. I'm far from knowledgeable with grammer and syntax and spelling and... Lol god bless literotica i may try writing smut simply because I know I'd gain immeasurable advice that i could actually put to use in other writting applications)
