All Comments on 'The Old Switcheroo'

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"Switch"-- a stick or whip used to punish, I guess. I like your story. The dialog works, and it's not to wordy. I actually had a girlfriend who-- I realized too late-- seemed to crave what your wife wants in "Switcheroo." So, your story seems that much hotter to me. Good work. Keep writing.

This guy is short, fat, and 19. None of it made any sense. Poor marks.