All Comments on 'The Awakening'

A good story and getting hotter but then you just kind of stopped - just as I was getting really wet.

More please! This lady wants to read part 2!

Good first effort. Looking forward to seeing more. One question though--that first page when she is getting dressed. She realizes she forgot to put on panties--she undoes her garters, puts her panties on and refastens her garters. I always thought women would put their panties on over their garters. I would think it would be a pain to have to go through all that again every time they had to go to the bathroom. Is that the way most women wear their panties when they also wear garter belts?

Loved your story,but it was too short.I'm selfish because I wanted to read more about her getting fucked by several men.

Erotic story. Character had great legs and a sexy attitude, what else do you need?

i would like to hear what happened with the party. I bet you went and let your panties down for more action. I love your story. You will do great at the party gang bang. XXXOOOXXX

Hi gorgeous

don't stop there u must write more

Very nice story, DewMee ... enjoyed it ... it needs being continued !

Hey, the worthless cunt club is gathering here today.