All Comments on 'Room Mates'

All I can say is, Excellent

Thanx

Made me have sex with my sister

Is I am off to play sultan and harem girl. Thanks for the go juice.

What A "HOT" story !! Yes, please lets keep at it - this was well written and we have to see what she has in mind next !! They can have a lot of fun on his vacation and never leave home - thank you.

What a sister !!

You can easily keep this story going.....please doooo....

A few minor location gaps found myself surprised that they were somewhere new. Otherwise it was magnificent. Such excellent vocabulary and well painted story is extremely impressive.

Once again the Queen's english has left me pissed off. It was a short story so I read it anyway, but I hate reading English quotes that I don't understand or an Author not being vulgar enough. I want to hear the swearing from the sister and brother. Are you sure she's 24 or is that a typo..you mentioned she got married and had kids? Readers get turned on by the vulgar talk back and forth during lustful sex and you didn't bring that. Quite frankly it was boring and the Queen's English can do that to you. 3/5 and I'm being generous. You need a lot of work my friend. Keep practicing.

Loved it, please continue

Good story got me hard and ready to go again

Good start to a series if that is your intention. Leaving the story with the siblings naked and the narrator thinking while his older sister who seduced him to begin with is sleeping with her arms wrapped around his waist and her leg draped over his.

A bit clumsy, and too full, too fast, but the idea is fine, and I liked it. The Lizard is the sister I wish I'd had.

It's kind of quick. If you took out the 9 inch cock shit, it might help.

When the sex started the narrative got out of hand it's like you had a thesaurus on your lap while typing. Priapus... really? Otherwise not bad

hope you keep going & ASAP

Like others have mentioned, I hope you continue this story.

A shame, I believe , the prelude wasn't draw a little longer... Perhaps more seduction.

I look forward to future stories, hopefully with same subject mater.

34D... on a diver's frame? Have you ever even seen a diver? Lose the ridiculous stats (see other post re: 9 inch dick) and just write realistic people.

Put the thesaurus away. You dont have to present everything all glorified up. One page of exaggerations and idiotic suggestions and the story lost me.

Personally, I like the fact you can use the English language well. keep writing!

another chapter would be nice

I enjoyed this I should continue writing part 2 and part 3

I'm reading this over 6 months after the previous comment. Obviously, I am not the pervious commenter. I also am asking, how adout a few more chapters?

What a great start to a promising story. Now all you’ve got to do is finish it.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It was going well until Joe let us know that he had " nine inches of granite" to offer his sister. The author lost me at that point.

This is the 2nd story of your I have read. I think I will look for more of them. Thanks

Knock the love whore up