All Comments on 'My Son's Lap'

I'd swear I've read this story before, and had more than one chapter. Enjoy it every time.

Hot. Five stars.

This was so good. I’d definitely would love to read first threesome and New Years family threesome.

Jasmine you definitely need to write all of the suggested sequels.

Another 5 stars.

A good story and looking forward to the next in the series. Not up to your usual standard though with the number of typing errors and words missing. Suggest you find someone else to check over your story before you submit it. Sorry, but i had to let you know

I hope there is more to come

You need to fire your editor.

Make a whole series!

you are still the best ever

New Year's Family Threesome for sure!

Great opening story. Any or all of the suggested further adventures get my vote to take this plot further.

Yes please, for more sequels.

Hell Yeah!

El regazo de mi hijo: y sexo furtivo

El regazo de mi hijo: mamá anal

Siga porr favor, estaba muy bueno. mas lenceria tambien. gracias

Great writing.

The 'A Uber Ride Home' and 'Valentine's Day' sequel would be nice.

You are a very good writer and I love reading your stories and would love to read the rest of the series. I look forward to reading them because I have read all of your stories. Thanks for sharing them.

It was very good, but we never got to the stockings and feet love?? I was looking forward to that?

id love to see where he brings in one of his other submissives and also his sister finding out about the relationship with mom

Definitely need sequels. Great story!

As always we want more!

I would love to read all of the story titles that you have listed above.

Please ;et me know when they are available.

(rjb49@bellsouth.net)

So many errors

Far too much dialogue

Cringe ending

New Year’s Family Threesome and maybe bring in the other submissive women to play with them both.

Four out of five. The story was very good but the editing left a lot to be desired.

Wonderful story. I would be more surprised if you were to write one that wasn't. Please continue with more. My Son's Lap: Anal Mommy would have my vote for the next one.

Anal Mommy for sure!

Yes to everything, all the stories sound amazing. Might I suggest adding stories were he builds a Milfy harem.

yes more as this has a great flow

please keep them going i can't wait untill the next one

Story seems very familiar but please continue

Yes to all your ideas for future stories. MORE!!

I have to agree with anonymous regarding the spelling errors. Great story as always, but the editing is not up to your usual standards.

More, more, more

Is his dad's name Mike or Jake? Page one has the name Mike inferred as his dad, then changes to Jake.

As usual, extremely erotic - God bless horny submissive MILFs. Merry Christmas and Happy New Years (note the plural).

Definitely like to read more

Yes to the sequels. And a request: Ramp up the sex (descriptions.) After all, she is a submissive slut.

Love to see son breed his mom, her friend, and the young employee too…

Good story. Fun, albeit totally implausible. There were a few typos and misused words, and at one point the narrative switched from first to third person. The dialogue was a little repetitive. Once you establish who is talking you don’t need to repay the he said, she said every time. I only point these things out since this is a competition entry, which should be held to a higher standard.

Yes please continue the story line

A great story, but as others have said, your editor let you down, allowing a number of typos, missed words and punctuation to get through. Please don't let your standards drop and good luck in the competition.

Yes continue the story with each of the ideas you have presented at the end. Always love reading your stories.

great story ! need MORE !!!

Yes you need to write them all, it would make a great series.

The sex was hot as it always is with your stories. However, I do agree with the other commenters regarding the spelling and grammatical errors. Way more than normal. Tell your proofreaders to stop getting high before looking over your stories. Five stars and a favorite point!

Best story. Any or all of the sequels above would be awesome.

Very good, a few grammar issues, but not enough to lose five stars. At one point you switch from first to third person in the same paragraph.

Tc

Great story - and I've enjoyed so many that you've written.

I will say, both for your and Tex's benefit, that the misuse of your/you're throughout was a bit much, and that's not something I'm usually aware of in your work. I'm hoping it's the result of rushing to meet a contest deadline.

You mixed up I/she/he a ton of times. Really broke an otherwise excellent story.

In the words of homer Simpson, yes yes oh god yes to all the sequels

I can't wait for Mom gets anal in the back seat of a car as Family drives Daughter back to college, with all her luggage around them!

Unusual amount of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors for your stories.

So, I think mommy needs to find out who the son's other pets are ...

Definitely need more chapters and all of your ideas are great and I look forward to reading them

More story’s please

Truly, a great story, that would have been better if your editor was awake. I.e. 'dad past away' not passed away. There were others, too, but this red hot story let me get past them.

Love to Read more!

Always look forward to reading your stories. If you write them, I’ll read and vote for them.

That was a joke about thanking an editor, right?

There were so many missing words, wrong words, sentence fragments, there's no way anyone edited that. Not the first page anyway. That's all I could manage.

Yes please to all of them!

Continuing would be great. All of your proposed topics sound good with one exception...there is NO way the son would be taking a virgin asshole given her obedience/servitude to her husband. Now, if you'd like a challenge, by all means try and write a story...a BELIEVABLE story, that would pass the credulity test. Now, writing a sexy, anal encounter would be absolutely logical...maybe as a part of their joining the Mile High Club! At any rate, a very enjoyable holiday submission.

YES to all!!

Write all those other stories

Great story! Yes, many more adventures!!

MORE ! Any of the above , Or All of the above !

All of the above

Great work! Yes to all

Why not a pregnant family member??

since son wasn't drinking he drives them home and just mother and son explore each other.

Authors note:

I sent in the wrong version of this story.

A new edit will be sent when I get home in a couple days.

Ps: this isn’t Tex’s fault but my own carelessness.

I hope you enjoyed the content regardless of some sloppy errors by me.

More would be welcomed for sure.

Yes...yes...yes...yes...yes...and YES!!!

This was sloppily written. Too many misspellings and incorrect word usage, you usually do much better than this. it's a hot concept piece, but slow down, get it to an editor and make them more easily enjoyed.

Several mistakes such as this: Don't want to get your legs all called

Dyn-O-Mite! Can't wait to read the others.

The anal one but I agree with the previous comment, drop the virgin part

Yes to more! and I also agree with Libertine55, no way is Mom an anal virgin.

How about writing all those stories! I was so fucking hard when I read this and would love for you to continue

this.

More, please! Sneaky Sex and New Years Family Threesome sounds so hot!!!

Great story like all your other ones. Before you continue to add more to this story, How about you finish " What mom knows ", I know I'm not the only one that is waiting for more so finish "What mom knows ".

Story, mom, the other submissive and son party

I’d be totally happy to read all of them.

New years or sneaky sex

I would love to read more!

Same story by this author. Again and again and again.

great start, Do them all.

this story needs to be expanded.... very nice....

Another fine submission, lady. Now we know the real reason fir Snata saying Hi, Ho Ho.

I agree with cageysea. You need a real editor - way too many errors.

Definitely want all the parts you mentioned at the end.

Please continue the series.

As a follower of SilkStockingLover the story line was great . . . Not familiar with the editor but must agree with so many commentators - poorly edited. Terrible to release (as in fire) someone before Christmas but IT MUST BE DONE!

I started my comments with passed vs past then read other comments before going too much further.

Most significant suggestion: get this edited properly and re-submit for the Christmasses Story Contest.

Relate closely with this as I have been a Santa for over fifty years. And yes, women of all ages do 'approach' Santa.

Yes, would absolutely love more. All of those would be amazing. Thanks for this 5 star gem.

Do uber ride next. Then sneaky sex set at the family Christmas party. The do a mile high mommy with some anal. Then valentines where they happen to get caught by the daughter/sister. Then the follow up can be the threesome.

Please I would love to hear about the "my sons lap; anal mommy"

Please continue the story line. Think it would be advantageous to get son’s pet involved after sister joins them.

Please continue with extra chapters.

Yes, please

To any or all

My Son's Lap: New Years Family Threesome

Love all those ideas and to add bring in the other pets his mom knows for an orgy.

It was ok, but the lousy spelling put me off.