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All Comments on 'My Neighbor is a Slave Trader Pt. 01'

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Pancho_BelgiumPancho_Belgiumabout 1 year ago

well written, can't wait to learn more

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

You repeatedly confuse genders and make other silly mistakes that an editor would catch. Please take advantage of the volunteer editor service that Literotica offers.

brokenbutcutebrokenbutcute11 months agoAuthor

I will keep in mind the wording of the stories, I know it is something I need to improve. Thanks for your comments.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

A solid start. It needs a few corrections that an editor should have been able to catch. Keep working hard and keep writing.

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I'm not broken anymore, but I'm still cute. when i'm here i'm thinking some very unfeminist thoughts. I need to live my own version of Miller's Girl. A good lip and spelling is more exciting than you think.