All Comments on 'Mom Lets Me Touch Her Ass Pt. 02'

by ArkansASS

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

take your time and put your chapters together. these are too good to be so short. even a 3 page story with 1 chapter is better than 3 sepparate half page chapters.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 3 years ago

Ask and ye shall receive I guess. Good follow up chapter but a little rushed. I noticed some typos, missing words and missing punctuation. The story and flirting between them is still hot though and I like the way it’s escalating slowly. Keep it coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I'm throughly enjoying the story. Wish it was more than one page at a time. Appreciate you sharing and keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Can't wait for part 3

Can't wait for part 3

BoytitsBoytitsover 3 years ago

Slow but getting there keep it going!

ArkansASSArkansASSover 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it! Chapters 3 & 4 are pending for release.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Another great chapter

Keep some reluctance from the mother!! Let him gradually break down her barriers, let her be regretful etc. These stories on here move too fast and seem unbelievable. Yours has potential. 5 stars

csltcsltover 3 years ago
Fun Story!

Looking forward to their next adventure.

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