All Comments on 'Misbehave and Pay the Price.'

Finally a story with no pansy-ass, pussy footing around business... Inventive, the ending did feel a little too "happily ever after..." but otherwise great.

bloody good i say bloody good, i had a girl like marie, kept me in line 24/7. Cannot wait to read more of your work.

And totally over the top. I'm thinking they belong in jail for several crimes, not the least being kidnapping, assault and battery and rape. Neither he nor Marie have any characteristics that indicate they are anything but animals. No redeeming social skills at all. I'd prefer that they spent their time in jail being raped and beaten.

blew a massive loaded (load)

pain staking effort (painstaking)

door bell (doorbell)

which ever orifice (whichever)

Grab your self a beer (yourself)

blind folded Carla (blindfolded)

see my handy work (handiwork)

back yard (backyard)

sun rise (sunrise)

short term (short-term)

Registered Nurse (registered nurse)

play thing (plaything)

iron clad (ironclad)

In second he and Marie were naked and in the bedroom (seconds)