All Comments on 'Locked Up Ch. 01: Purity Ring'

So wild. Such a great story so far!

Loved it 5 stars

5plus here!

Or should I say not cumming... LOL

I love stories with inventive (and terrifyingly effective) chastity devices - this one is really hot! Can't wait for more!

But:

It ended too soon -- unless there are more chapters in the future.

There wasn't enough foreplay and teasing other than all sex-organ related (mostly blowjobs for him, and pussy eating for her). Her breasts? Quickly described and then forgotten. Her ass? Loved to watch it, but nothing else. If she really liked ass play -- or wanted to see if she liked it -- why not engage in some? Force him to lick it while he was spending those hours licking her pussy. Have him finger it to see if she liked it manipulated, and things IN it. Talk about it. Ask him if he'd like to fuck it. Ask him what he wanted to do to it. Tell him what she would want to do to it.

Gave it five stars even with all the shortcomings.

He gets in his car, drives to the police station where they remove the ring and arrest the bitch for assault, battery and sexual assault just to name a few of the crimes she committed. Who would stay with a woman that demeans, degrades and humiliates him? AND threatens his health by putting on a ring that cuts off his normal functions?

1 star

Really like this first part. Looking forward to the rest :)

Dump the stupid bitch. Besides her being a selfish cunt, there is no such passage in the bible.

Deuteronomy 25:5-10 said that if a man died before providing sons to his wife, it was the duty of his unmarried brothers to “marry” her and to give her sons. In Genesis 38:9, Onan wanted sex, but did not want to provide for his brother's widow. So he disobeyed. The passage is about shirking responsibility, not masturbation.

What ? You think I can't erotica if I took a History of the Bible class ?

What a HOT and awesome fantasy! I want to wake up and find myself in the middle of wherever this group calls home! [tongue hard, micropenis weeping!]