All Comments on 'Can I Watch?'

That was jst awesome ...i felt so hard reading that lovely mom-son story...

Just great! Just the right amount of tension and wondering will she/won't she and final fulfillment at the end. Well done.

One where they fuck in her bed and she's totally . Maybe have then do everything together especially oral sex.

I love this story....

Can we expect more from this story?

Got me very very hard ;)

Any chance we can get these worked into part 2?

good story, but i felt you used the adjective 'incestuous' a little too often.

Many young men indulge in such behavior. Many prim and proper mother's ignore the situation. It is best to address the situation and instill the proper discipline that young men need.

Short or not... I loved it. You really need to ad at least a second part. I say at least, because your story could become great stuff. Don't feel hurt by the other advices here, there's something right in what they said... but please, keep writing that story, you've start it very well. And like one of the guys said here ; It would be great to ad stockings, and the highest heels the mother can wear at home and at work.

Delicious little tale of a mother and son. Very erotic...like every good story, it was exactly the right length too. Great narrative and dialogue! Looking forward to the next!

Very good story. Thank you very much for sharing. I am well past 19 now but that thoughts I had when I was living at home with my mom, heck even after I moved out, hell even now. LOL

So HOT and arousing ! I hope you write another chapter, as Tom and Karen his Mom are really longing for direct sex and are developing a great arrangement. His mom can teach him many things and Tom can too. Thanks !!

Makes me wish I had a son.

While I enjoyed the story,I believe that I was enjoying it "too well" as I finished it sooner than expected.With that being said,congrads' on a well writen piece.

that was hot i was 16 the first time i fucked my my ill never forget the first time

A great premise about switching the pictures... plausible, at a certain level.

I'm hoping that the concluding lines lead to a Chapter 2 in which the lad enjoys his mother's ass.

Mmmmm I loved it too. I wish I had a son too !!!! Lol. I do have 2 nephews. Hmmmmm, I wonder ......

Allison

Good story so far, but it cries out for more exciting chapters. I hope you will supply them as rapidly as you can!

i liked it reminds me so much of me and my nephew almost an exact story

and we still are having the hottest times

he is my husbands borthers son and so hony and turns me on just like her son does, ihve played some with son but we hav decided not to go all the way i just jack him

Please do more sequels, this is the kind of story I have been waiting to read foir so long. Not to unbelievable, at the same time very hot. I love how the mom doesnt give into it to quickly. If you could work in some threesome involving the son and mom I would be forever indebted

I beg u to write Sequel plz i want him him to fuck her Ass

The fact that he was using a pic of Mom and using it to masturbate to ... and Mom found out about it is very hot.

what a lovly story! Wow, really its a good one. Well written and keep writing. Thanks alot.

this is a very hot story, please continue with tom fucking his mom in the ass

I loooove the way she let him see her private parts until she finally fucks him, please continue,mmmm

Fucking Hot!! where is the 2nd part..?? im feelin damn hot.

Hi Heyall,

Loved reading this. I have a similar experience, but I cannot say it was incest. It was with my sister-in-law's son. I did feel guilty at first since I am much older and part of the family. Can you email me. I can tell you my story and with your writing skills, I am sure it would make good reading

angela_lee_mbf@yahoo.com.

Thank once again - Angela

i loved it, so very close to me and my son in every way exceept i am married

but so close to our realtionship that has grown owver 2 years , what about other mom's out there is ur story close

go'on. I really like this read.. I'm hoping you will extend this story. I'm the neighbors sun that had it off after she got divorced...what I have refereed to as my sex'ucation. she was the first smooth pussy..and I have never gone back. first anal...now addicted to fuck ass...she was surprised that I has such an oral fetish...and completely surprised I'd lick her ass with the same enthusiasm....not to mention pushing in deep. We were each others fist pee play....oh I could go on and on

I never thought I would find anything like this so erotic.

FUCKING LOVED IT

A purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect 10!

i never comment i have read hundreds of story's on this site this is one of the best

if not the best please write more

wheres the build up? theres no way she would just go straight to the point within a day. the thought process was sloppy. you need to add some sort of suspence. now that i said all of that it was however very well gramatically correct and very precise. the eroticism of it did have a good impact

This story, after some introductive character self-examination, and overview, really gets to the nub of the plot hurriedly.

Mom (Karen) thinks she has control of the necessary incestual stimulation of her sexual urges and needs; however, she lost control long ago with her son, just after she agreed to bargain with him. She never looked back after that encounter, she wanted more, and she gave more, and she got it all with nary a pause!

Of course, as with most readers, I concur and urge the writer to extend this most joyous, incestual (I DON'T CARE HOW OFTEN YOU USE THE WORD) mother and son joyfuckfest. My personal opinion is Mother Karen should be impregnated, they began dating, fulfilling their lives as any male and female lovers do, movies, camping, dinners, a cruise, hiking, cabin in the wilderness (all with Mother Karen showing a little skin, no panties, braless, even her son letting her play and arouse him in the same manner, but ALWAYS with just the two of them). The perfect incest relationship is keeping it pure with just the love-bird characters acting just as if they are any other couple in love, engaged and married.

A nice fantasy......I came twice....keep it up :-)

😍I really enjoyed this, mmmmm had many orgasm Thank You Pleas keep writing

Awesome story. I have fantasized about that premise(mom finding out son masturbates to pics of her) and you did the story great justice. Am rock hardnow. Thanks,

Great story. Lost count how many times I came..

Why can't this happen in real life! Its so perfect in every way.

This story is super hot. Are there sequels?

Imagine the mom as jacqueline fernandes.. Its way hotter then

A great story, well told and it could be true.

I had a similar experience as an 18 year old. I was working the night shift in a hospital and came home in the morning one day, walked in to my bathroom and found my mom using my shower. She made the excuse that she didn't want to clean her and my shower that morning.My mom was left a young widow when I was 10 years old, and I don't think she had had a man since. When she had finished showering with me watching, she asked me to have a shower and she could watch. Then she asked could she come in and wash my back and give me a massage to ease the effort of the nights work.She washed my back and massaged my shoulders and then turned me around and washed my erect cock and brought me off.

After drying each other she said that we should wait till l had slept before we talked about it.

Will write the full. true story one day. K

So I could feel some one cumming inside my wet pussy ane I bet men would rather get blow jobs from a woman thang a guy and I deff. like giving those

I need more! PLEASE make a sequel!

Good story; pretty hot & easy mom! We need more like this.

was divorced and we lived alone. I was 20 at the time of story. She was very good looking. When I would get home late she would be already in bed asleep. I was very active with other women but I had many times masturbated because of her. A few times I walked in her room and lifted the covers and watched her naked pussy and tits, I would caress her pussy hair lightly and sometimes kiss a brest, she never seemed to notice, I would then go to the bathroom or my room and jerk off. I know she knew what was happening but we never spoke or did anything else!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

fanfucking tastic

mmmm....... aaaahhhhh i am mother of 23 years son. we have similar conditions. its very nice to have young cockall day and night...... uuummmmmm aaaahhhhh

HOT LIKE HELL ! ! ! ! ! ! MORE, MORE, PLEASE

The build up and of course the Mother being so shy and all! lol

A very enjoyable read but I was disappointed the mom didn't dig up the old bathing suits she was wearing in the two pictures. I didn't really find the top or bottom choice added anything to the story but the fancier "handjob" angle was great.

Loved this. Got me so wet I fingered myself to two orgasms while reading. More please!

you could really do this story a great favor is you wrote about him staying in is mother's bedroom and sleeping with her and fucking her all night long!! Think about writing another chapter./ Bonnie

But you jumped to the sex a little quick. Right from a sexy handjob to the pussy in a flash. Maybe having mom masturbate with him some. Still hot tho. Rusty

it was a cool story needed more looking forward to another chapter

I remember when I was 13 I found an album of my mom wen she was younger, she was having sex in the pics(no idea who the guy was, before I was born, lol) that was the first time I really began masturbating daily! Wen my mother found out, tho, it was not a good thing, unlike this story! Loved it, I stroked the whole time reading!

Makes me hard, now I have to pull my cock out and stroke.... mmmmm

I agree with some of the other comments. MORE CHAPTERS! Your style of story telling needs to be enjoyed by those of us who like your wit. Thanks!!!

that is an awesome story. please add chapters. the G man

loved the story, although i think you need to work on the dialogue in future, it was a bit stiff in places and felt a bit too formal.

One of the best stories I have ever read!!!! Please write at least 2 more chapters to this great one. Adding to it would just make it even better.

Nasty - nasty - nasty! Moms don't fuck their sons - and it must be because it's so f---ing hot and horny!! I like this one a lot although the fantasy factor is so f---ing high I can't believe it!! Keep it up we need more stories like this to keep our cocks hard!!!

Thank you for an awesome orgasm, you are so talented, can't wait to read more of your stories.

That was so hot.

How nice to read a good story with normal sized tits instead of ugly great melons..

What a great story, well paced with great descriptions. I got so hard reading it. More please perhaps with her sister?

I absolutely loved the way you captured the moments and erotic scenes...my Mom stroked me several times and to this day are considered the most incredible times of my sexual life...never mentioned after, but that all knowing smile never went away!

I really enjoyed her complete capitulation there toward the end. From a prim, proper, uptight mother, to her son's cock slut, just like that!

Had me a hard in seconds.Hope theres more to come. talking of cum I did and it was great. Even had a second wank which lasted longer but with the same outcome. Wonderful

Once again I was so hard reading this I just let my cum rush out of me without touching myself. Then I scooped it from my stomach and swallowed every bit of it .OMG I love tasting my self after I read your stories.

I thought of how wonderful it would have been to have fucked my mom. She had an

absolutely lovely puss and could take my step dads ten inches up to his balls; I used to sneak peeks when they fucked. Hot story!

Excellent story! It got me quite hard. My gfriend will enjoy the video I made.

I wish you had drawn out the seduction so that it didn't happen quite so quickly. Otherwise, great job!fdf2

Handjob with vagina has become my new fantasy. Thank you for writing such a great story.

The first time I have commented on a story.

You set her fantasy very nicely and I believed every word, the speed of it all was right, this would be quick in real life. I actually think there is some truth in there somewhere, but how should i know?

There was only one bit missing, I think she would have let him have his wank with the picture and go in and watch him.

I don't agree with the others asking for more from these characters. But I am looking forward to reading more of your work of mother son relationships.

Loved your story, it was well written. Look forward to more of your stories.

Perfecly potrayed how every mom should be like.

Loved your story I'm sure I came as much as the son did while I was reading it.

I vote yes. great story and had me stroking and cumming. 4yourpleasureiam

VAGINAL MASTURBATION. Damn, intercourse (make that fucking) was just down graded to masturbation? Nice way of including mother as the leader of sex with her son. Keep going with this story.

I think you missed an opportunity with that 'bathing suit' picture. I was really hoping to see that bathing suit show up again.

I never see much point in continuing a story unless you introduce more characters, it's the first time taboo thing that gets me, after that, it's anti-climaxtic

Brings me back to when I was a 15 year old young man. I know what having a sexy mom is like, and wanting and jumping at the chance to experience sexual contact with her. There were several happy times after the first one!

mattwilson4253@gmail.com

I really liked it. The way it worked out, except she needed to get him to do the chores before she let him have his jollies. She also needed to share their juices with him before she went up to shower.

I fantasized about my mum, this story was so hot. I imagine she was my mum and I was he.

that was how it all started with my aunt

great story again

That was hot as fuck! I was hard the whole way through. Great story, thanks!

Goddamnnn great story..i am gonna jerk reading this

I don't have a son to fantasize about but now I sure wish I did !

Great read!

That was a great story, totally amazing & hot! Can someone let me know if we can exchange mobile number & chat abt this stuff, hope it's possible

This was a wonderful story I look forward to seeing more of your work!

And to Darla 7000, who wrote,

"Ohhh, my !

I don't have a son to fantasize about but now I sure wish I did !"

My mother is deceased now, perhaps you'd like a "pretend son" to role-play with?

Wouldn't that be fun, "mommy?"

From the time I first remember I wanted to suck and fuck my mom. She had been a chorus girl in her youth and had a great body. I regularly spied on her all summer long through a knothole in the bathhouse wall, and even got to see all the other guest ladies as well. Twice in her life she undressed to her bra and briefs, stocking and garter belt. Both times I came in my shorts watching her and then she grinned and left me alone to clean up.

That was a great story and as always you write with a style that is very casual yet portrays the character's thoughts and feelings extremely well.

The one thing I would say is that I wish they were longer. To have 2 or 3 chapters to some of your stories would be awesome and I hope in future that may happen. Either way I enjoy your stories and I hope you keep writing!!😊😊

it'd be great of you would continue this story, it's so hot so far and the promise of more seems to have been left hanging ...

love this story!!!!!!

Excellent story for a beginning. Can't we let these 2 play a bit longer?

I usually avoid incest stories but that was fucking hot!

This would have been so much hotter if it had been twice as long thereby slowing down the action and building up of sexual tension. 5*.