All Comments on 'Brother and Sister Help Each Other'

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ChrissrChrissrover 10 years ago
Believable

Excellent start, Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great story

I hope you continue the story. I got an instant hard on visualizing your story.

brosismombrosismomover 10 years ago
ok but not great

in saying that hope next chapter is coming ASAP

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Killer set up cant wait for more.

ChasBChasBover 10 years ago
Seems Kind of Real

Except for the ages - they would likely have been maybe 14 and 13, more or less - such an episode could have really happened to siblings. Whether it would have progressed to anything more overt would depend on other things: how much indoctrination they had received in conventional morality would be the biggee, but also how horny they became, and how much privacy they had. Then there would be the awareness of having to live with whatever they decided to do beyond the relative innocence of show and touch. SmallTitFan is an excellent writer, and I look forward to future episodes in this little saga, as the siblings decide, no doubt, to explore even more; as a little satisfied curiosity leads to more temptation.

Pilbaraman111Pilbaraman111over 10 years ago
Mms tasty

Cute story, would like chapter 2 please.

sabra16023sabra16023over 10 years ago
Waiting for next chapter

Good start on the story, needs more chapters. Thanks

Slithy2013Slithy2013over 10 years ago
Next chapter

Like other posters, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter.

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
too hot, needs ch 2+

great story- nice hot sex, nice kids, needs more chapters thanks

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 10 years ago
A really sweet story that is very believable

I would like to read another chapter where they go all of the way and become lovers.

Thanks for the read.

coochiebarbercoochiebarberover 10 years ago
wtf

wtf was that? a guy waiting for love and turned out to be loser? man you need to rewrite whole thing

OleguyOleguyover 10 years ago
Delicious naivete

How sweet these kids were. Ok maybe a little late in life for this but the better for a bit of yearning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hmmmm; story starts with "I'm in Love"; but didn't deliver

Don't get me wrong; I really like what's here, but it falls short. It feels like the story just got started.

Since it doesn't mention CH# 1 we don't know if there's more in the works, but we're all obviously hoping

THX;

DKP

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
less than half a story

you need to either post two or three more chapters of this or delete this one or the other. posting less than half a story is worse than no story at all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Don't listen to the Haters...

If they weren't smart enough to find the Prelude, then you have to Question thier Intelligence. I don't think they grasped what the story was about. I really Enjoyed it, ( big fan of small Breast and Thongs, on Women AND Men..Kudos, am now heading to read more of your Stories, Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
OMG Loved it

couldn't stop reading till I got to the end. would love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What I thought at 14!

Never once when I was 14 did I wonder about anyone getting High or Drunk let alone a young girl in my school. What a different world you lived in.

Patch

FreakonaLeash73FreakonaLeash73almost 8 years ago
Keep it the good work

Really enjoy that and hopefully more chapters to come.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

That was pretty fun! However, while Ive seen plenty of clits get larger when you rub them, I've never seen one get wetter, just dryer. Now everything below that gets wetter, hence a regular dipping in of the finger, then back to the clit...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice buildup

But then the sex was much too fast. No step by step. Take your time, better to have the process take a long time.

RailroadTareRailroadTareover 6 years ago

You wrote, “The only thing better would be seeing it . . ."” This line is memorable. While I've read several stories with the same theme, your phrasing makes it better….inching over the line making it quite real. Your scene progresses to, “"Sweetie, you don't need to feel bad about your boobs. I think they're beautiful. If you weren't my sister, I'd . . . wanna suck and lick on 'em all day and all night."” Another perfect line that inches the scene forward realistically. Well written. Armed with those lines I would have tried it on my cousin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Clits don't get themselves wet

As Anonymous said down below... no one has ever seen a clit get wetter when you rub it. They do not produce juice.

Please learn basic female anatomy. Her juices are produced from her vagina, and need to be brought up to the clit, especially if she's lying on her back. It would be great if you'd edit your story to be anatomically correct.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Please continur,it's an awesome story

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
A beautiful and erotic start.

I can’t wait for the next episode.

Fantastic start. Please continue.

Love and respect between siblings.

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaos8 months ago

Lizzie sounds so adorable and sweet <3 I love small boobs as well so this is a great treat :3

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