Blooming Lily Ch. 01

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She could see pictures in the bubbles and imagined them becoming real as she focused on the water still beneath. The steam rose steadily from the full tub and she couldn't wait to be submerged in its warmth. She had always loved taking baths and the feeling of calm that came over her as she soaked. Luke's voice summoned her back to the moment as she lost sight of the heart she had seen a moment ago in the bubbles.

"Remove your shirt, Lily." The order came from beside her. Once again, her fingers found the hem but she couldn't bring herself to pull until 10 seconds came and went. As promised, they came to her aid. They each took the hem at their side and slowly lifted as her hands were raised and her shirt was removed.

"Remove your pants, Lily." Damien's voice was soothing as she lost herself in the bubbles once more. She eyed a rabbit forming near the faucet as her pants were unzipped and slowly pulled from her legs the brothers bracing her with their strength as she stepped out of each pant leg beside them. They remained crouched and she readied herself for what came next but no order was given now as they pulled the boy short style underwear from her slowly, exposing her clean shaven mound. They paused for only a moment admiring her then helped her once again removing her underwear as Johnny boy released her from her bra. Her ankle and wrists were freed from the soft lining of the cuffs and her focus remained on the bubbles as she was helped over the edge of the tub and settled into its warmth that enveloped her now.

She had a million questions swirling in her mind but settled on the first as it had plagued her since she had been taken.

"Why?"

Damien

He sat on the tubs edge as the brothers took their seats in the bedroom waiting their turn with Lily. He started slowly handing her a loofah with body wash before speaking. "I will speak first then let my brothers tell you their reasons as we all differ on why we chose you specifically and why you are here for each of us. The first and foremost reason is your father had a problem I am not sure if you were aware of or not and ran up a debt he couldn't pay and ceased to make payments on. We went to speak with him about collection and to work out an arrangement. You were offered in lieu of payment, Lily. Normally it is not our policy to accept such trades but we saw the treatment you were receiving and decided we would like to give you a better life than that here with us. You were being abused and we could not let that happen. It goes against what I, and I will speak for my brothers here, what they believe in as well. We also happened to be looking for a young woman like you."

He paused giving her a chance to add questions but she remained silent listening as she ran the loofah across her chest and he watched pleased to see her washing herself as he continued.

"Why you? I'm assuming was also part of your question." He watched as she ran the soap beneath the water and enjoyed the blush that crossed her face in trying to hide her activities beneath the bubbles.

"I desired your service here because you fit many of the physical characteristics I desire in a companion and the rest I will train into you as time goes on. I am, what is referred to as, a pet trainer and you will be well trained, corrected when needed, and often, spoiled as my pet. Specifically, as my puppy in time. Each of us specializes in a different training style and we each have different tastes and personalities which is why we will be training you separately. Since I am speaking now I should let you know that you will spend Tuesdays and Fridays with me training, sleeping, and spending my days beside me as I work." He paused giving her the chance to process and to ask any questions she had.

"Are you going to hurt me?" She paused looking curiously confused. "And what does a puppy do?" She asked as she wrapped herself tightly beneath the water staring down into its shallow depth.

Damien ignored her lack of eye contact for now but noted it as a point to train on later as he considered the answer to her question carefully. "You will never be hurt by any of us Lily. I will train you and with that training will come correction as it did last night but as you experienced it is only to help you learn and it is never more than we discuss before your correction. The things I do with you may be painful at first but I promise they will become pleasurable over time for you and you will even crave them one day but that takes time my pet. If you don't like something or it is too much for you then all you do is tell me or tell one of us and we will do our best to make it better for you but if you don't talk to us we will never know. We want you to be happy here Lily. Believe it or not. Does that make sense to You?"

"Yes Sir." She answered after a brief pause of thought. He waited for a moment deciding to wash her now before answering her next question.

"Please hand me your washrag to the right of you." He asked her politely. She looked nervously at it as she picked it up and looked back to him.

"What are you going to do with it?" She asked nervously as she fingered the rag beneath the water after grabbing it as he asked.

"I will be washing that sweet little face of yours. Your lips are mine to take Lily. Each of us has claimed a part of you that is exclusive to us until you are further along in your training as I explained before. Close your eyes." She obeyed shaking as the silence settled and his fingers traced the outline of her lips. She looked up hesitantly at him still holding the washcloth.

"I've never...." She stammered and he cut her off reassuring her.

"First off, I told you to close your eyes Lily." He waited as she closed them again before continuing. "I know it will be your first-time Lily and it is okay. I will teach you and I will be gentle at first. We are all going to make your first time very special for you and no one is going to force you. Yes, you were taken against your will but now that you are here we would very much like you to be happy in the things you do and will be made to do. We take no pleasure if you are not enjoying yourself pet and trust me we enjoy our pleasures," he whispered the last words in her ear and watched, smiling down upon her, as she shivered. He rose back up speaking clearly again from his seat beside her.

"Now to your second question, pet. You asked what a puppy does? Are those your only questions for me before I continue?" He asked waiting for her response.

"Yes, Sir. I think so." She answered keeping her eyes closed as instructed. Her obedience pleased him.

"Very good. You asked excellent questions, by the way, Lily..." He paused waiting.

"Oh, thank you, Sir." She responded quickly.

"So, what does a puppy do? As my puppy I will take you on walks. You will be taught basic commands as well as tricks to show off to our guests. I will feed you three times a day. You will lay by my side or stay close by playing if permitted when I am working. You will exercise in the yard when I take you to play. As my puppy you will go piddle when I take you out and you will obey my every command without hesitation. That is what puppies do and now that I have answered your questions. How about I get you washed up"

He took the washcloth from her gently and folded it into his palm. He washed her face as he would have stroked his precious pet. Bringing the cloth from her temple down and around to her chin. He repeated on the other side and took care to wash her eyes and nose. After he finished he set the cloth down leaning in. "Open your eyes my pet" Her eyes fluttered open and he kissed her lips softly startling her but had predicted her movements already with his hand ready at the back of her hair to hold her softly

in place. "Good girl" he praised and delighted in the way her eyes lit up without her knowledge.

Damien got up giving Luke the seat next to answer her first question.

Luke

"Hello, my little Lily" He greeted her happily undressing as he spoke. Her eyes were adorable in the way they widened with fear and curiosity at her first site of a naked man before her. He smiled as she balled up and tried hard not to glance between her fingertips hiding her face. "So, I know this is supposed to just be a question session but that bath is looking very good to me right now so I am going to join you." He stepped in behind her and she scurried, splashing frantically, to the other side of the tub as he sat down stretching out his legs. "I was right. This is nice." He leaned back letting the water rise to his chest. "Come here and sit between my legs. I want your back against my chest as we talk, Lily." She uncovered her eyes but made no effort to obey as she remained where she was too scared to move. "I will keep my hands right here until I tell you I am moving them. Ok?" She eyed him suspiciously and held herself tighter, immobile until he spoke again, harsher this time. "That was me being polite, little Lily, and I won't give an order twice." She crawled over to him trying to hide herself beneath the thinning layer of bubbles which made him grin until she turned and sat with her back facing him but still too far for his liking. "Closer, Lily. Don't make me pull you to me." She scooted back until she could feel his hard chest against her back. He sighed heavily behind her content to feel her soft skin against him. "Good girl. I am going to move my arms around You just to hold You. Don't be scared." She tensed anyway and he could feel it as it spread across his chest from her body's contact. He throbbed at the very feel of her as he wrapped his arms around her letting his left arm slip around her waist while his right held her shoulders close to him. "So, my little Lily, now that we are comfortable. What questions do you have for me? I will allow you 4 questions" He noted grinning.

She stiffened as he tightened his grip around her shoulders drawing her closer to him. "What kind of trainer are you?" She asked hesitantly.

"That's one and would you like me to tell you or to show you, my little Lily. I know how long it can take you to decide so I will give you to the count of 3 to decide and after your fourth question I will show you. 1....2...."

Her answer didn't come quick enough as he pulled her tightly to him kissing her neck softly trailing his affection to the nape of her neck where he planted a kiss. Her breathing sped and she whimpered quickly covering her face in embarrassment. "Good girl. Ask your next question." He ordered working her up again as he resumed his tender kisses upon her.

"Why me?" She asked between gasps of breath.

"I wanted you from the first time I saw you dancing. Then I saw what that monster had done to you and I wanted to show you the pleasure of pain. I wanted to take those memories away and replace them with this moment. I wanted to train you to serve me and see you blossom for me, Lily. That is why you were chosen. You are perfect for us." He whispered in her ear taking it between his teeth biting softly and trailing his nibbles down to that same spot upon her nape. "That's two. Ask your third now." He grabbed the soap bar as she stuttered finding words watching him intently.

"Can I ever go home?" she asked her voice cracking threatening tears.

Luke stilled his affections, holding her closer for a moment in silence before speaking. "You are home Lily. You will never be returning to that place again. We gathered your things and they are here and that is all you will be permitted to keep from that life. I don't ever want to hear you refer to anything outside here as your home again. Do you understand me Lily?" He nearly growled to her.

"Yes, Sir" she sobbed silently.

"Thank You for reminding me, little one." He paused kissing her softly upon her shoulder as his fingers caressed her skin beneath his hands firmly gripping her. "There are things you need to know that I won't make you use a question on. You will serve and train with me on Mondays and Thursdays from the moment you are brought to me in the morning to the moment I pass your leash onto Damien. You will refer to me as Master or Sir. If I prefer either at any given time I will let you know. When you are sitting with me I will always want you right where you are now. Between my legs unless I position you otherwise which will happen from time to time if the mood strikes me. You will speak when spoken to which I have noticed is an issue for you now. I will correct that first, my little Lily. I enjoy your silence but only when I have ordered it. If I want to hear you speak I will tell you and if I want to hear you scream I will make you." He paused nipping her neck enjoying the whimper that escaped her as she struggled to pull forward with no such luck in his tight grip. "Stay still, Lily." He growled softly and she stilled slightly. He smiled kissing her in his approval "Good girl. Now where were we... Oh yes, another issue I have noticed that needs immediate correction. I want your eyes on mine when I speak to you. You have a horrible habit of looking down at nothing. I want you looking up from now on. I love the way it makes you squirm. Obviously if you are facing away that will not apply but if I place you at my feet and I speak I want your eyes locked on mine the second you hear my voice. I want to see into you as you speak with me. I don't expect you to remember all this right now. In time, it will become natural for you but I just wanted to explain the rules and my basic expectations. Do you understand, Lily?

"Yes Sir." She answered. Auto pilot took over as she sat numbed by the flood of information and the overstimulation of his hands upon her.

"Very good. Ask your last question, Lily." He said trailing kisses across her shoulder blades settling back to the spot he would soon claim.

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Been_That_Done_ThereBeen_That_Done_Thereover 1 year ago

Promise, but poor writing.

evonnaevonnaalmost 3 years ago

such a nice-to-read, interesting, cute story.... but also feels might be a bit confusing for younger readers, which is why i'm leaving this type of comment (i don't think I ever have before).... the writer is clearly very young, and i don't mean to be harsh, it's great that she's done such a good job at writing a story like this, which is entertaining with so much detail etc. and the emotional, soft romantic side from the brothers is there strong, which is attractive to us romance-liking readers etc. and I will keep reading it, but some things that stuck out to me strongly so far are:

"Consent was an absolute in their world." this was funny. and she's hogtied at the back of their van :) LOL. i'm not sure if this was put in as a joke, or if the brothers are genuinely meant to be portrayed as this level of unaware and cutely 'delusional'. if so, bless. (clearly consent from Lily doesn't exist here.)

"Has she been told the basics?" is something Damien asks the brothers, and then Lily gets anger and a punishment from him, for not answering a question that was not aimed at her in the first place. This makes the brothers look sweetly unintelligent and unaware of the basics of logic, whilst they seem to think of themselves as some kind of masters of slave training :). (no big deal in the bigger picture of the story, but smth that stuck out. in a sense it's interesting character development.) and they take it so seriously, when she's JUST been abducted.

Another thing is that the brothers seem to speak to her like she's severely stupid or at the mental level of a 7-year old. "You ask very good questions." is said like she needs intense affirmations like this like a small child. They might be unintentionally doing an interesting mix of sternness, anger, gentleness, random bdsm, therapy aimed at a small child and who knows what else.... unless they're trying to regress her to a level of a small child, perhaps... (?)... (if they are speaking to her like this because they have concluded that she's psychologically traumatised and fearful, they probably wouldn't be putting her hogtied into a cage in a van etc.... and i wouldn't think they would have concluded at this point that she is a 'little', naturally childlike in her ways)... their internal monologue is a lot about taking care of her and with a distinct sweetness, but of course they seem very unaware of what they are doing (kidnapping, random bdsm when she's most fearful, violence, non-consent, personality 're-formation')... i'm of course not fully aware of all the aspects of bdsm etc. preferences, or of trying to regress someone to a state of a small child in a slave-abduction scenario....

Lily's reactions to things occurring are also very strange and I suppose speak of her traumatic childhood/youth.... for instance 'why did she agree to that' is smth she's thinking when she's in a cage in a van, and when it was the most obvious logical thing to do, but her internal monologue is this level of self-critical and confused... she was still drugged of course.... she is also an interesting 'leading female' in a long story, who is quite 'not really there' in many ways... very timid, submissive, confused, self-effacing, traumatised and a simplistic thinker (calling her 'simple' feels too harsh), with seemingly quite a broken sense of self....

I think I wanted to make this comment as this story surprises me often, but also does it in a creepy way :), where there's a strange feeling of a mixture of 'we are the good guys, we care about you, we are all about consent' from the guys towards Lily, and a distinct sweet/soft/romantic, sort of 'normalising' tone to what is going on... when the guys are obviously kidnappers who are doing things to Lily without her consent, and are looking to psychologically condition/abuse her to be their sex slave/sex toy, and likely severely alter or nearly remove her actual personality and own mind and decision making process.

Just hoping the younger readers will be reading stories like this in a clear-headed way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
No way!

I get the whole abduction for slave training scenario but these guys do nothing but contradict themselves and each other. One minute they talk about consent as if it's a standard but nothing they do is consensual. They say they don't want her to fear them but all her training is contingent upon her fearing their consequences. How is it "not forcing her" if she's not permitted to resist let alone say NO! They say they will not cause her pain or hurt her but they already have and threaten more by not following their rules. And don't get me started on the sadist! The most they could hope to achieve is some conditioned form of Stockholm Syndrome. My hope is she lulls them into some kind of false sense of obedience and "chloroforms" each one in their sleep and burns their little slave factory to ground with them in it! By confusing REAL sexual slavery with affection and/or loving relationships shows that not only are all three of them self-serving narcissist but are batshit crazy to boot!. Real justice would be for them all locked up in general population with all their fellow inmates knowing they are rapists. They'll learn real quick what it's like to be someone's little bitch!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Interesting story dear!

Hello from Greece! Interesting story dear! Hopefully, in reality, love to exist, need the conscious consent of all parts. One may own the world, but if this one cannot love or be loved, then owns nothing. Because love cannot be owned.

"Hymn of Love"

"Love is patient and kind;

love is not jealous or boastful;

it is not arrogant or rude.

Love does not insist on its own way;

it is not irritable or resentful;

it does not rejoice at wrong, but rejoices in the right.

Love bears all things,

believes all things,

hopes all things,

endures all things.

"

ShanayashaShanayashaover 5 years ago

This was really an amazing start, and yes I agree with the fact that abuse is abuse but that makes things more interesting, it makes me think what she will do next, stay or try to run. All in all it has good start, especially with the different point of views. Keep writing!!

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