All Comments on 'A New Life Pt. 01'

Would enjoy reading more of this story! Purely as a helpful note:An editor could make some of the grammar and punctuation a little less distracting. That way the reader could sink into the story more easily.

Fantastic story - please keep writing

I noticed that the Tags said : husband, wife, BDSM and then I did that whole assumption thing *sigh*.

It is quite well written but I just found the story to be a bit bizarre, to me it lacks realism. If she loves her husband why didn’t they talk? He’s already cheating on her, now she’s going to do the same, what’s the point? BDSM works best with trust, there’s not much of that around with either partner.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (UK)