All Comments on 'Disemvoweled'

A well crafted primal howl. I chose your poem for mention fin the New Poem Recommendations Section of the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum (http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25). Please browse through the forum and join us if it's to your liking.

Truly a primal poem. I chose your poem for mention fin the New Poem Recommendations Section of the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum (http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25). Please browse through the forum and join us if it's to your liking.

Unfocused on U

Uninitiated on A E I O U

Unrealized education

Unfulfilled ambition......

Gr8 poem Primal: I tried and made a poor imitation on U.

Came over from the new poem recommendations thread.

I enjoyed the clever way you used the vowels when you got to "you" and "why." Good title, too.