Disemvoweled

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Stabbed in my words
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A Three line email
A message from ghosts past
A stifled scream, internal wail
A love that could not last

Elaborate deception
Ecstatic at my call
Entwining imperfection
Escaped before my fall

I wish she had just kept away
I wish I'd never known
I wish I didn't have to say
I wish love had not grown

Oh, your needful pain
Oblivious to mine
Obfuscation in your brain
Obligation on hotline

You never gave
You only took
You stole my brave
You stole her look

Why'd I sink into your mire?
Why could I not see?
Why did I play with that fire?
Why won't you leave me be?

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LyricalliLyricalliover 3 years ago

Came over from the new poem recommendations thread.

I enjoyed the clever way you used the vowels when you got to "you" and "why." Good title, too.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 3 years ago

Unfocused on U

Uninitiated on A E I O U

Unrealized education

Unfulfilled ambition......

Gr8 poem Primal: I tried and made a poor imitation on U.

PiscatorPiscatorover 3 years ago

Truly a primal poem. I chose your poem for mention fin the New Poem Recommendations Section of the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum (http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25). Please browse through the forum and join us if it's to your liking.

PiscatorPiscatorover 3 years ago

A well crafted primal howl. I chose your poem for mention fin the New Poem Recommendations Section of the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum (http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25). Please browse through the forum and join us if it's to your liking.

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