All Comments on 'Worth the Effort Ch. 04'

Another good chapter!

5

Still loving it. I like the way you bring them together and show the love that is building. I gave this chapter 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.

FTDS!

I’m really enjoying the development of the characters in your story so far. I’m glad you started to flesh out several (including the mom), as I was worried they might be limited to only one or two dimensions. For example, if the mom always gave in to Brianna when she’s being difficult, that isn’t as interesting as if she can (and does) stand up to her.

Really looking forward to seeing how this story continues to evolve. Thank you for sharing with us!

I loved how you added a whole lot of character to the Mom. Gives her a completely different light.

And I loved how you preached the mantra of acceptance without saying anything and showing Shane's response. His response to the guy's situation said more than any direct words could have.

THANKS

I only gave it a 4 here it is a very good story .except to have it stop riight after the bedroom sean im intrigued. Please dont make us wait to long.for more

Penn Lady

You have written and great story with twists and curves in the PLot line. This series reminds me of your Blue Line stories from the Past. I love how you have brought Morgon and Shane together with the dysfunctional family on both sides. I knew when I saw your name as the author that the plot line was going to be as Great as always with You. I can not wait for the next chapter of this story since you left them in Bed at Shane's house?

Marklion

Fantastic writing!

Great writing. Well written and excellent editing.