All Comments on 'Worth the Effort Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great start, though Brianna’s bitchiness—and other people’s acquiescence in it—stretches credulity. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I look forward to the next part/s, with keen interest.

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 3 years ago

Great chapter! Glad to see posting a new story!

5

late2thepartylate2thepartyover 3 years ago
Welcome back

I’m looking forward to reading more of this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My 2 cents

Very nice start. You made Brianna a real bitch! And I think we can all see Evan will be miserable in no time (if not already). Morgan will have to decide if this wedding is worth all of this or not. I will continue reading. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well written!

I had a bit of a problem sorting out the characters but I'm immersed in wondering what will happen next. I gave you a 5.

steeltiger01steeltiger01over 3 years ago

To the anon from 12/11: you think Brianna stretches credulity, but let me introduce you to my half-sister & her little group of synchophants. Weddings tend to make folks like that worse, and hers was a hell-scape for our family. I think my stepmother is tye only one who still talks to my sis now.

nestorb30nestorb30over 3 years ago

Brianna needs a boot up her ass, except it wouldn't fit because of the big stick that is already occupying that cavity

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Interesting beginning! Look forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I wish I could blue-skadoo into this story and smack Brianna in the face. Dunno what her fiance sees in her.

Lions86Lions86almost 2 years ago

Brianna deserves to catch Ebola or something. Shes a cunt just for the sake of being a cunt. I hope at some point in this story she either gets better or a semi truck smacks right into her while shes crossing the road

jott50jott5010 months ago

Wow! So much family drama!!!

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