All Comments on 'When Sara Says No'

Loved it! Had me tingling in no time. Very vivid descriptions; lovely writing. Enjoyed the naughty chat parts.....made me feel like I was right there in that conversation (grin!).

Thanks!

Incredibly irresponsible writing - I came all over the place. Have you no consideration? It takes ages to clean this mess up. Thanks.

I'm a little confused how I feel about the writing and my ease of comprehension. I'll write you and give my feelings.

All and all it's a 5/100

Thank you

I have to hand it to you -- you did a fantastic job on this story!! I love every bit of it!

For me, this was one of the best-written stories I've read on Literotica...not to mention a really hot story. Really well done.

One of the best writers on this site!!!!:)

Well done, youbadboy. I always love reading your material.

the slow seduction is what I enjoy the most. I kept thinking ahead to what methods I would of used. For me Sara is the perfect partner demanding to be teased to almost a limitless degree. I have read your stories to two women I know. Both will not "have" sex with me. They say no which means "go slowly". Eventually on occasion, after gentle patient caressing, we almost explode with orgasmic pleasure. It's a wonderful game we cherish. Your stories have been part of this. Thank-you!!!

As usual, you have given us the standard of writing we have come to expect from YBB - never disappointing and getting better with each story that you write. Please keep up the good work! Top marks again, Pete.

This is the best story I have read on this site. Fantastic! I shall now read all your work. You have a new fan. xx

and in my office as well!@!!.. oh what a fantasy! oh what a wonderful mutual seduction... and oh what a climax!

dangerously and delightfully irresponsible..

thank you

You are one of the best on here. Thanks for all the great stories.

lovelovelove

I suppose you've earned it. ;)

As always, I love your work! Damn, I hope you will write more SOON! Miss you much! Thank you so much for your wonderful submissions!

Rhea

This is the second story I've read of yours, and I loved them both. Will be reading more of them soon, keep up the great work.

You are the class act of this site. Great stuff!

You are the class act of this site. Great stuff!

THANK YOU for giving me some of the best orgasms I've ever had. When I'm looking for some self lovin' I always come to you first.

I've never read a story on Literotica quite like this one, and I've read a LOT of them. It's not necessarily a new genre, but most definitely a new style. It's hard to imagine that a main-stream published novel could be written in Instant Message prose, but if so, you'd definitely be the innovator. I loved - absolutely - this story. You captured the true annonymity of the internet and created two strangers out of two people who knew each other all of one's life; just to let them get to know each other - the true each other - all over again. It was amazing to feel the evolution of their online relationship to a point where you knew they'd be lusting and fantasizing over each other.. and eventually fucking each other. I've been a fan of yours for a few years now and I apologize now for not leaving more positive comments, but all the other stories of yours I read seemed to follow pre-established formats. They were incredible, but not nearly as innovative as this one. The way you wrote this story really allowed me to feel it, rather than just read it; and I think everyone else would agree with that. I'm a stickler for grammer, so every now and again I'd have to pause in your story to re-read a sentence just to cement for myself what you were trying to say, and even when the grammer was off, it seemed to be for a reason. I enjoyed the fact that his grammer was different from hers in their emails and IMs to each other. It really gave them depth. It felt like you had simply copied and pasted a father and daughter's real emails and messages, rather than writing them yourself. Again.. great story. Loved the slow progression to the intense climax. Loved the inside jokes between him and her that seemed like I was a part of as well. The characters just seemed so real. Very well done. Can't say enough good things, so I'm just going to stop here. Waiting patiently for a new story to enjoy...

Stefan

It's hard to find words to describe the sheer brilliance of this story.

Of course its kinda difficult for me being just a dumb blonde... but the first thing I did after reading this story was run around the house and try all the 'remotes'.

Anyone thats confused about that should read this tantalizing story and let me know where such 'remotes' can be purchased.

Thanks for a terrific story.

Many seem to climax while reading your stuff. What about you? It seems logical to think that while writing words which arouse others, you yourself might be experiencing similar emotions and/or feelings. Can you tell us?

What do you get out of all of this?

I wonder how many readers and writers get together in the real world?

Interesting,no?

I got a hard on reading your piece. It is because I have the same fantasy for sometime..You know, fuck the daughter, the mother, the cousin--haha! It is a good piece because the concept of narrating it is quite new (for erotica tales, that is)--the e-mails, the chats, the horny exchanges between the protagonists, which i must say, I practiced too. I am involved in a place of work where I meet a lot of young women, and in the course of conversations, I usually inject this technique(which you use here)to my great horny advantage, especially, if the woman is my type. This is the first story I have read from your HOT file, and am looking forward to getting better and better hard ons till I finished them all. Good luck to all your future writing efforts.

I have to admit that I have never had any thoughts about fucking my dad...actually I hate the bastard but I do love to read stories about father/daughter relationships because I DO have thoughts of being with an older man and father/daughter sex always fits that scenario. This story was the best that I have read on Literotica...it made me so wet I had to take care of myself before I finished reading the whole thing...and then again after I was done reading. I loved the build up!

Has to be one of the most erotic taboo stories i have ever read. great writing! Want more.

of incest, at all, but I'm not going to ignore the fact that it was well written.

I enjoyed it a lot, and, I also can't find a single thing wrong with it ;)

Why would anyone who is "not a fan of incest" be reading your stories? They are clearly about incest and this one was obviously about father/daughter incest. (Which, by the way, is my special favorite. Yum.) Neither am I aware of any way that they are compelled to finish a story which they find so abhorrent.

And, if the occasional grammatical error offends them so much, War and Peace is available in every library.

My favorite was the date interrupted story, because I, like every other woman on the planet, have a fascination with rape. The element of force or coercion is subtle, because of the site's rules, but it was there and I just loved it. Incest and rape in the same story is the best, at least for me.

I was raped by my brother at a young age. But, like the stories here, it didn't stay rape. I was loving it and begging for more before he finished. Don't get me wrong, being fucked by my brother was wonderful, but I so envy girls who get fucked by their fathers. Being raped by my father is my ultimate fantasy. It gets me off like nothing else.

If you ever need to do any research for any of your stories, I would so very much love to collaborate.....

Very well done!

No other father/daughter story ever rang so true to me. I could feel their emotions, their ecstasy. You painted the Mona Lisa of erotica with words. Now all other F/D stories have something to strive for. I applaud you beyond anything I could ever write here in this short comment. Keep up the good words, you bad, bad boy.

Years of reading about the most erotic of all love's and now I have read the best. The slow, realistic build up was genuine. The final union was so complete.

i reserve that comment for the best. i imagine you write professionally and are a published author. glad you reserve some time for this kind of story. it was great as are your others. im in awe.

Thank you

This was the best story I've evr found on here.

I've read most of your Literotica stories now and you are a true "artist". Your sense of what is erotic is amazing, a superlative that really doesn't do you justice. I suspect you are a professional author who just writes these great little short stories for kicks. I wouldn't be suprised to find out you write full length books under a name we would all recognize. Please keep treating us to your "horny" alter ego.

I loved it! Was rubbing my self & felt so hot. Wish I had a daddy like that too.

FC

This was a truly erotic work.

Not having any daughters or sisters, and nothing near a close relationship with my mother, it is sometimes striking for me to read of others' lustings and experiences.

But, I do see the point, and never did understand the guy who said, "doing something nasty would be like kissing your sister".

I always thought, "gosh, I'd kiss your sister mister."

I sure enjoy reading you. Thanks for your continued efforts.

-Pultoy

***** (5 stars)

I loved the way you wrote it. I was so hard thinking how the story started and how it ended, I wanted to come right here in my pants.

This is a great story. I really really didn't want it to end. more chapters?

i particularly liked the descriptions of 'no' at the beginning. made me smile...wish i had known this when i was dating.

Jesus your a talented writer :) thanks again for all you do!

You are so good !!!!!!!!

Wonderful stories and story telling.

Thank you,

Old Silver

Hot and sexy story should be a series!!

I quite liked it as a one parter only. So hot. Made myself cum on my toy. Naughty girl that I am.

The buildup was great. Their mutual giving to the other. I could almost feel my cock inside her.

Great erotic writing. So good, so hot.

Simply amazing. So naughty. Just wonderful writing. Very vivid.

Soooooooo hot!