by Many Feathers
A great original storyline, and could be a very hot family affair. I'll be watching for the next chapter. Thanks for the well written chapter.
Good as always, just was not thinking when I started reading and then went to look at Author and should have known it was you.! Again can't wait to see where this is going - but thinking of several ways it could go. Thanks. JAG/TSO
I certainly hope your fingers are dancing across the keyboard writing 'the rest of the story' as we speak.
Loving it so far!
Thank you all. Am glad you're enjoying it. And you haven't seen anything yet. Am sitting here as I write this, working on Chapter Two (nearly finished with it) and am rock hard as I am. That should tell you something, as it's (honestly) not very often I get aroused like I am now, writing one of my very own stories.
Hopefully, Chapter two, and more...will be as equally well received as this first chapter has been.
And thank you all for your votes/comments and emails to me about it. I truly do appreciate each and every one of them I receive.
Many Feathers (aka...Thesandman)
Please, please finish this story. The cliffhanger ending is killing me!
I love stories with the two most dangerous combinations: incest and Voyeurism. Kudos, you made me wet. Please check out Home Alone 2 when it comes out...soon I hope.
Julie
them all fucking each other - vice is nice but incest is best - though sex between a girl and boy with different parents in a new marriage is not incest as they are not related to each other.....
three unclesin and out of jail all 40 smom always had room for them like mom i had meaty thighs and a big round bubble butt j-lo ass ive been horny kid as early as age5 i loved sticking things in my butthole well when i was8 i fell asleep naked butt up one of moms dildoes ballsdeep in my asshole. only when i woke the dildo was replaced with my uncle trents ten inch boneras it swelled shooting a gallon of warm sperminmy butt seeing i wokeup he made me suck his dick and eat his cum.turn out when i was 5 my uncle don fucked my butthole3 times one sat nite i slept through all 3 buttfucks im no homo i just enjoy big hard adult cocks in my butt and mout
Something is missing and it seems to be a GB. Enjoyed reading your story. Look forward to the remaining chapters.
I'm really hoping that, that is what the father in this story is going through. I hope you don't portray him as a prude or a highly moral person. Because, I don't think I can take another pussy as a male lead. If he's just suffering from 'Dirty old man syndrome' then his reluctance and embarrassment is understandable in this situation. If you try to make him out to be the latter then you have another flop on your hands. With everyone else being such free spirits him being moral, will loose credibility. If it's just a fear of being thought of as a dirty old man type of thing and not a 'this is wrong everyone else should be ashamed' kind of thing then, that is believable.