by ggchuck
Really great story. Excellent effort. Mika sounds like the perfect Domme. Hope you write a sequel to this. Would be very interested in hearing how Carl settles into daily life with Mika and her Matriarchal family.
It is as if you have enter my mind and written a story on my strongest desire, to be controlled, dominated and trained by a female who is younger and smaller than me. I long to be Carl. Please tell me that he begged to become her loyal servant/husband.
It was an erotic read with interesting story lines. Ending pretty extreme for a first time experience for Carl.