All Comments on 'Under my MIL's Dress Pt. 05'

Good story. We don’t want an epilogue. We want a full blown chapter

What a great story. I loved it. It was so suspenseful, and I loved how it developed as a relationship between them, not just objectification. The hair stood up on my arms when they kissed, how you described it. It's clear you love Marie Christelle as a character, and I loved her too. She's so brilliant how she covered for herself by saying she'd had too much to drink when she collapsed.