All Comments on 'Tropical Break'

Quite lovely, though i would prefer that you ended your story with some talk of their future together, or any talk at all. You write incredibly well, it's just needing a paragraph or three to figure out where they are now- will they couple up? I think they will- both are very single, no encumbrances. Do you mean to have another chapter?

Lovely. Very erotic and well written. I like the open ended finish even better than if resolved.

5/5. Chapter 2?

Excellent. Well written. Very hor! I agree with others, a second chapter would be nice.

loved it well done so romantic and such passion. love that they are a real life age not like the normal 18yr old son and the drop dead gorgous 35 yr old mom like most of the stories on here. please more chapters waiting in suspence

Many feel this way but are afraid to act. we're all we've got now. You and me. You're the most important person in my life, and I love being around you.

This needs more chapters

60yo is to old .. still great read.

Loved this story but you need to write more and have them live as man and wife 5 stars