All Comments on 'Trophy Wives'

This is a very well written story. The characters are vivid. The plot twists and turns. And the story is very hot! I love the way the characters care for each other, emotionally and sexually.

One comment about psychiatrists. These days therapy is done by psychologists and social workers, usually with a Master's degree. Psychiatrists are MDs. Psychiatrists practice in hospitals, clinics and in their own offices, largely supervising and prescribing a client's use of medication. They may be part of a therapeutic team with psychologists and social workers, but they usually don't do therapy. How do I know? I've been seeing psychiatrists and therapists for 30 years, on and off. I have bipolar disorder.

The plot is clever and the story well written. I thought it was interesting but not necessarily hot. The narrative in the earlier sexual encounters seemed a bit clinical.

All said nicely done. Good insight and good delivery.

Top drawer stuff - really. Great plot, believable characters, all appropriate twists dealt with expertly. Well done.

Simply awesome

Great story, real characters, excellent plot line, great sex. There's more?

R

A really sexy really well thought out story. Congratulations

This is the longest story I have read on this site. It was also one of the best stories I have ever read on this site or in most books. The plot was tight and sexy allowing imagination to run wild. I'm thinking about showing this to my wife in hopes that it may begin a conversation that will have the same possible results.

Thank you so much for this.

No doubt, this is one hell of a story and you kept it balanced until the end. However, I didn't like it when she offered Steven her ass and not first to her husband.

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Given the fragile male ego, it could have gone bad from here on. Just imagine, he lost his erection when she encouraged Steven to take her ass and walked out when they were in the bathroom and when she said "are you still there?" after Steven left (as if she wasn't sure he would stay?), she got no answer. He didn't come home that night and the next day, when he showed up, he told her he was thinking of moving out and gave her 5000 $ as her share for fucking Steven. When she questioned him about it, he told her the full story and then said he must have fancied Steven a lot because all of what she did it was for Steven and not for him, her husband :

- she went to the gym to lose what she considered excess weight, while he always told her she was just perfect for him,

- she shaved for Steven, not for her husband,

- she liked him to go down on her but reluctantly gave him and enthousiastic BJ, unlike for Steven,

- she denied him her ass, yet gave it to Steven, and he did not believe it was to save her pussy for him,

- she was really building up for her time with Steven and putting much more effort in it that se ever did for him,

- her orgasm was much stronger with Steven than with him, so she must really like sex with Steven more, and she surely had earned her fee, hence the 5000 $.

Six months later they were divorced and she hooked up with Steven.

trophy wife, mistress, lover, soul-mate is still the same.. TK U MLJ LV NV

Good story, flowed well, interesting plot, went along the lines of real life possibilities - very really close!

At first I would say that he played with fire letting hsi wife become part of the games. He had more of a propensity to remain faithful, despite his horny thoughts about Jessica.

Unfortunately, Peg going along with Stephen and her obvious thrills, her attitude, language and and conduct toward her husband...well - latent player, swinger and hot wife (slut) - Pandoras' Box - in full mode.

Goord story but I think our guy is going to end up being single, Peg with Stephen or quite possibly some 70 year old rich guy who lets her fuck Stephen on the sly.

Our guy, after he recovers emotionally, and he will suffer, should consider being single for a long time, especially in his field of endeavor and his social life.

I think all your readers know that Peg is into swapping, swinging and/or just pyschologically manouvering hubby around so they he thinks their next and following sex partners are his idea.

Personally - I think she marries a rich guy, does Stephen discreetly and maybe a few of her new husbands clients for the contract benefits.

Thanks.

This could be an excellent 3 to 4 page story - instead it is overly wordy 12 pages of too much wasted talent

great story

one of the most unusual but entertaining stories I've read on this site

It's really well-written, and very hot so the length wasn't a problem. Since I always root for the guy in the barrel, when things turned out alright, I wasn't miffed.

That being said, though, I have to agree with an earlier commenter. Peg does all these things for Steven (weight, shave, anal), and hubby's just fine? Not a jealous bone(r) in his body? Hmmm. I find the likelihood of his banging Jessica more plausible than this.

Twelve pages to tell the story of a whore.