All Comments on 'Trip to Maui'

I have two opinions on this story.

As a BTB (burn the Bastard), it's a good story. Although, honestly, her soon to be ex husband sounds like he'd be far more hurt by financial hit if her layers were smart enough to insist on good pre-nup.

However, on the Dalton's side:

1. She is made of money. How could she not know that he was divorced? A basic cheap background check would find that, never mind super duper pooper PI report with extra research that she could afford.

2. I'm less than enamored of Dalton's conduct, and 100% can't for the life of me figure out why she'd want to keep him around afterwards? At best, he's guilty of lying to her to get sex and money from her - not a great indicator of a healthy future relationship. At worst, he cost a good man a chance at BTB revenge (of course, it ends up it's his ex-wife and not another guy's wife, but HE didn't know that until the end of the trip; so he not only abused her trust and goodwill, he likely also fucked over another guy, as far as his decision making was concerned). Tell me again why any sane woman would want that selfish prick in her life?

First of two!

5

Two stories in one day? Merry Christmas to the readers. This one was really funny.

Another well interesting and good story from just plain Bob. Always a winner.

A delightful little romp! Thanks JPB.

Neat, sweet, and complete.

JPB, master of the flash.

Thanks for this.

Fun

I love the ending Bob, well done!

You wrote my dream word for word!

Fantastic. As in fantasy. Always a good way to start the day. D

good potential, but too choppy with too many holes.

Meh….just no drama. And the “twist” was weak tea….

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3 ***

Nice!

Funny. Kinda saw it coming but still funny.

One of your better ones. Short and to the point. Could it happen in real life? No way. BUT---in fantasyland, hell yeah.

Hum?

I don't generally go for revenge sex stories, but this one was palatable.

short and sweet

This is an exciting story, with everything a good story needs but it just kinda ends. The story frame is excellent, you have the cheated wife getting revenge, an intriguing twist with the wrong husband. But the story needs to be given some fleshing out, joining the mile high club, sex on the beach, sex in the hotel pool, public sex, flashing money buys a lot of freedom. The only sex being described was joining the mile high club on the flight out.

Bob! Enough of these one page short stories. They are outstanding but we need more. How about telling the life story of Pauline French? She is famous on this site and it would be so cool if she had a dog named Buster. Just saying.

So implausible. So much copy and paste from your other stories. Completely unnecessary to exist as a result. Bring back Pauline French.

Not your usual quality

Gee, so many envious guys now wondering - Why not me?

amusing ending to say the least

Funny - 5*

Nice, short, interesting, story.

Um simple (as in simple minded) short fantasy. No reference to Pauline or Bobbie just a grown up Robert. Thanks

Two in one day! Excellent.

A fun Story! Great Story, Great Writing. 5 Stars, cuz I love a happy ending! thanks

Well, the twist was clear from the outset, but it turns out that the counter-twists were already in place! Kudos to JPB for Sweetie having to return very early, as speculated. Kept if near the short-story range! But does it meet my criterion regarding marital relationship consequences? Not really!

5*

A good, well-written, fun story with a surprise ending. 5++/5!!

I enjoyed this. I had almost the same thing happen to me. A woman showed up at my door and said that her husband and my wife had been sleeping together and that she wanted to fuck me to get back at her husband. Who was I to turn down a woman in need of a fuck. So we spent the afternoon having sex all over the house. She left and when my wife returned from her business trip with her boss, she asked if her boss’s wife had stopped by. We both started laughing. You see, I encouraged my wife to sleep with her boss. It turns us both on. So his wife’s revenge fuck wasn’t really getting back at my wife at all.

My kind of revenge! You could have let us know what it was about Mary Alice that Sonia's dumbass husband found so irresistible. I wouldn't have minded. Was infidelity the reason Mary Alice and our hero were divorced? Five stars in any event!~~JB

5 stars - I actually like this fantasy - except I would be going to Nassau, Bahamas.

A lot closer and a hell of a lot cheaper than Hawaii.

I thought it odd that a PI didnt want to see proof first…. Now we know why

Short and sweet, gotta love a happy ending

Thanks for writing

Cute, I guess. Kind of cartoonish, as it is all about the theatrics and the setting. Nothing about why these people are being cheated on. Especially weak if we are to believe that some asshole is cheating on his wealthy drop-dead gorgeous wife. But that's just JPB: people do weird shit to make the plot work; Bob just writes down the words that fit at the time. Having to suspend disbelief for a Bob story is like having to suspend you dependence on gravity on a space station: there ain't none, and what there is is artificial. But its still fun, weightless, but fun. Thanks for the effort.

Slick.

Back to your great story telling.

Old time JPB

Nice story. like it a lot. AAAA++++

Loved it...

...that's no surprise, as it's how I think about all your work.

Another great JPB tale, and another 5.

Have a GREAT New Year !

EastCoaster

Entertaining story, my friend. Thanks for posting. Look forward to your next. Randi.

Ha, most far-fetched fantasy on LW. Loved it.

It

Very, Very, Good, Bob! Loved it! Thank you.

Hey! My hand is raised here…

Good one!

Short, pleasant read;four stars.

Knew something was fishy (lol) when he never asked her for proof of his wife cheating before jetting out to Maui. Good story.

In a nutshell. Good work!

Predictable.

Nice one.

... It was a story.

Not much else to say about it.

Excellent pipe dream.

Cute! Thanks for another fun read!

For a JPB, that was real good.