by jeninflorida
Liked the story there Jen. I dont think Ive read any of your stuff other then this new one but I like this one. Liked the fact that the hubby didnt get trashed on and such. It is hard for a husband/boyfriend to accept another person having sex with his 'other' but I they both want it...hey...to each their own. I dont live that kinda of lif, but I KNOW others do and dont gainsay them. But Really well writing I think.
Jen, to tell the truth, these are hot stories. Hope you do a couple more chapters of this tale.
you continue the tension well w/ the bait & switch, which i thought was done very well. it also leaves the general outline for chapter 3 pretty clear, so that should be fun to read when it's up.
very, very hot!
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in and fucks his wife. He's huge and long and thick and she leaves her husband. But he doesn't care since he has his new neighbor to fuck. Everythingt works out great for both of them. Except they aren't married any more, but what the fuck!
Ms Jen,
Good job! Loved the rope and the great surprise.
i enjoyed it for the arousal i felt for a scene that is not entirely in my normal range of fantasies. Very nice story twist at the end.
Hey, it doesn't make any difference as to who cums in her....she is a cum slut.
Jen, your writing skills are great, your story was very original with a great twist at the end. I love the slow buildup, which for me builds the tension and fire. Very nicely done.
Your story does the original purpose of this section proud :) . Thanks for the good work, I've enjoyed all of yours that I've read so far!
Why don't your profile show the stories you wrote like everyone else's?