All Comments on 'Tim's Story'

. . . is rather abrupt, but the story was well done. Thanks!

Great story. Terrible ending. Try again.

does not fit with the rest of the story...please - a do-over!

I could see Martha not having any contact. You have to figure she was confronted in a public place and called a slut. If I were her I would crawl under a rock never to be heard from again.

Great story with real characters. The ending was a little short but overall good

Horrible ending. Why punish the lead characters so?

Thanks for the reaponses. I agree that I did a crappy job on the ending. I thought expending it too much would detract from the main theme. As far as punishing the main characters, this is partially a true story and our heroine actually did cut off all contact as per the hero. The divorce and turning into a recluse is just a fantasy.

Again thank you

Nothing that you couldn't rewrite and expand upon..if you wanted to?

That said, where the hell did Martha come from? wouldn't he have know when she was coming back into town and on which flight?