All Comments on 'Tigress to Kitty Ch. 02'

As Always a great story!

I’ve read all your stories now and I think you’re a very talented writer.

There’s only one advice I would like to give to you.

Start editing your stories or get someone to do it for you.

It is such a shame, your stories are well written, with much passion and a great eye for detail.

But they’re full of sloppy grammar mistakes.

They deserve better.

It’s obvious that you are someone that likes to read which should tell you that editing is a must for a good story. (And good poetry)

For the rest PLEASE KEEP ON WRITTING!!!!!

Looking forward to the second chapter of Jelly Bean and Her Bail Bondsman.

That was amazing! You are a very good writer! I really hope you continue :)

Perhaps you meant "her mother was a realtor " ?!?

This story just grabbed me. I could feel the intensity. I did have a bit of a challenge at times when you changed viewpoint.

I have made my living as an editor and I still can't find all of my own errors and faux pas in my own writing. There are many here willing to help out. Just wish all writers would avail themselves.

I am going to read more and hope to see you are writing some more.

why did you throw in the Asian chick. 1 star

My grammer is excelent; but my spelling is terrible. I would rather read your stories with their gammar errorss; than many that are gramaticaly correct, but lack your passion and charater development.