by sosense101
Thank you for such for a wonderful journey. It got this old soul somewhat excited just imagining what could happen next with so many other women in the village to explore.
Lesbian stories turn most blokes on. This was superb with the discussions on underwear so intimate.
So Sense. You are getting better.
More please.
HF
Very hot and nice story. Love it. Nicely described. One of my favs. Hope there will be more
A really great idea. BUT
- the sex is rather rushed, deserves more care
- the writing is rather clunky, with some errors
- the older lady ClaraWil becomes ClaraJ at one point (within the same paragraph).
So... Nice try, but
A beautiful story. Very well written. Wish it was longer and the seduction went on for a bit.. Beautiful just the same.
Some of you have probably read some of the comments I left I was trained to pleasure, please and to always make sure whoever I was with squirted. Trishia taught me extremely well. There is nothing in this world as pleasurable and satisfying as two women experiencing sex together! Orpheum 69
It was good but not great.
Alison should have been much younger. Mrs. Wilson would be in her retirement years if Alison was 40.