All Comments on 'The Vampire'

Spelling and gramatical errors are distracting. Please use quotation marks to indicate dialogue.

I did enjoy the story, but the spelling, grammar, typos, and punctuation errors do slow down the enjoyable read. So please take a little more time with proofreading/grammar check/editor as workable. Thanks and keep writing!

Specifically you missed the "" when people were speaking; and you need to spell out "you" not "u" etc. Otherwise, typos and grammar errors slow this story but you have good form. Keep writing. Write On!