All Comments on 'The Sword and the Soul Ch. 01'

Though, just saying...you could always stand to have Mag get transformed a bit more by his soul witch. Bigger dick. More scales. What? Did I say scales? No I didn't! *runs away*

So, he meets the criteria of the handbill, but it does make you wonder if the truth is more known. Either way, the main character is quick enough with a lie or a bargain so I'm sure he could find a way to not be carrying a trophy of the target he was meant to slay. Carrying around a beast-man head is np. Carrying a trophy from the real target? Meet a dungeon until the noose is ready, amirite? Interested in the perks, aside from the more base ones presented for a Soul Warrior.

for the development of an interesting relationship. It would be fascinating to see if over time, the line between mistress and thrall began to blur as the hero grows in stature.

An exciting story opening.

5*

It was refered to her hot and wet cavern. While they were in a cavern, that was her place... was wierd untill I figured out it. Atherwise, noce story!

@iknowwhat, Haha, yeah I was doing that on purpose for effect, to prime the reader and for thematic reasons. Hope it wasn't too confusing, glad you figured it out, and thanks for your feedback!