by Seanathon
Different type of plot, but good job developing the characters. We'll written and hot.
Loved the story, safe to say that Archie is gone and for the sister... What a skank.
If Her ex and Alexa Hadn't Got Caught, Chance And Rebecca Might Not Have Lived 'Happily Ever After'! Awesome Story!
Did he get to be a stud horse, too? You can't leave the second hero hanging!
No Athair cant be a stud horse gelding means thst hes been castrated so he cant sire foals. Love the story hope u write another part so we can find out what happens
It was a really good story, but I agree that there really needs to be follow up as it leaves you wanting more.
...although I would've liked to see Archie's comeuppance at the end.
Not entirely sure what her sister must've seen in him either? One hell of a betrayal, either way.
Feel most sorry for the dog - being stuck there! Would have been perfect if he'd lifted his jacket to show him underneath? ;)
Loved the plot and the characters development....as so often happens in these stories you left the conclusion too quickly...too much left undeveloped and unanswered....but good read
14k views / reads in one week from posting tells you all you need to know.
thanx for sharing the tale with us
i have read quite a lot of stories with similar cases to this one, but this is one of my favorite...by a mile, or several...you are quite a writer...TANX
If the woman wants to get pregnant, she will remain lying down immediately after the insemination and raise her hips to assist the sperm in reaching her eggs. She won't immediately get up and clean the sperm away!
Ah if only I had stumbled upon this earlier I could have voted for you! You crafted a wonderful story that I truly enjoyed reading. For me, this one and Foolish April have been excellent. You haven't submitted anything recently but I hope that you do!
I was disappointed at the end. I wanted to know if she got pregnant or not. I'm glad she ended up with Chance. I wanted them to be together. Did she ever come back? Did she call her mom later? She loved her mom. I would think that she wouldn't just disappear and tell her where she was going. What about Athair?