All Comments on 'The Stranger in the Bar'

by rarmons

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sbabsbabalmost 8 years ago
i would never

have the courage to act like Melody but it was a wonderful story. somehow I think she won't be disappointed. it made me wet

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

And I thought that I would read the Billy Joel song.

Wonderfully written. A story "of the moment" Are you going to send us future moments?

Nemo18Nemo18almost 8 years ago

Man I hope we get to read about the next day. I want to know if she calls him and if it becomes anything more!!

csoshcsoshalmost 8 years ago

Waiting for the follow up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
THE ONLY THING MISSING IS THE ROPE YOU LEFT US HANGING ON.

IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL STORY UNTIL YOU DECIDED TO NOT FINISH IT.

I GAVE IT THREE INSTEAD OF THE FIVE STARS IT WAS ON TRACK FOR.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I liked the story overall, but the logistics of the whole intercourse made nosense, but I'm nitpicking 😅.

Would have been nice if you continued the story a bit though, it has potential.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

two miles in three-inch heels?

Ahhh, never mind

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