by rarmons
have the courage to act like Melody but it was a wonderful story. somehow I think she won't be disappointed. it made me wet
And I thought that I would read the Billy Joel song.
Wonderfully written. A story "of the moment" Are you going to send us future moments?
Man I hope we get to read about the next day. I want to know if she calls him and if it becomes anything more!!
IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL STORY UNTIL YOU DECIDED TO NOT FINISH IT.
I GAVE IT THREE INSTEAD OF THE FIVE STARS IT WAS ON TRACK FOR.
I liked the story overall, but the logistics of the whole intercourse made nosense, but I'm nitpicking 😅.
Would have been nice if you continued the story a bit though, it has potential.