All Comments on 'The Noise was TOO Much'

stupid and unrealistic premise...try harder

The concept was alright, but most of the dialogue was cringey.

She could have just busted him out to dad about waking her with his wanking

I personally don't care about realism in an erotic story. I thought it was really hot. Made me hard just like she did her brother.

BUT I STILL SPENT 20 MINUTES EDITING IT TO ENJOY IT IN MY TEXT EDITOR, TEXTALOUD WITH JENNIFER'S HOT SEXY VOICE.

Why do writers think big tits and dicks make good story’s?

Why are you judging this story like it is real?

It's a fucking jackoff story for fucks sake.

If any of you can do better, (which I doubt), then write it and let everyone judge you.

Personally, I just wish I had a horny sister, with a hot, teenage cunt.

I thought this was a pretty good story. Sort of a fun romp. OK, so there were a few instances of misused words, but it didn't ruin it.

Good job!

PLASEEEEEEE

Really bad. The kind of bad that is so bad it becomes a laughable comedy. Even though it wasn’t meant to be.