All Comments on 'The Master Ch. 02'

So the first chapter was good, but the second one was better. I like this a lot, and I'm curious to see where it's going. Who is this guy? Please keep these coming.

Chapter 1 wa great but whatever direction you're taking it with this chapter is boring and disappointing imo.

I'm loving the gradual character development, this has potential to be a great story!! Eagerly anticipating the next chapter just please, please don't fall into the common 'magic dick syndrome' pitfall that many authors here have fallen into. Love her feistiness and resistance to his advances. Keep up the great work!! X