All Comments on 'The Journey of Grace'

its a great start!

Nicely paced story developing the characters. You have a sure touch with words.

Hello,

What a beautiful story this far-you're really good at writing very horny lesbian stories!!

Regards,

Lindsay.

Holy shite done it again. How is it possible to fabricate n your mind your story and then compose it it into words. WOW. 5 stars

Glas I stumbled over your story.

I was already at a point giving up, only finding stories where D/s or BDSM is only about punishment, shaming, pain etc and especially not really about the connection between the partners with respect, love, devotion but only coldness, humiliation etc.

Just flat material to get ppl off, but without any depth. Seems this is different :)

Really enjoyed the promising open to what could turn out to be a very sexy turn on.

When I get to the end of one of these D/s seduction stories and it says "Rate This Submission." The irony just tickles me.

5 stars

I’ve read a number of your stories, and loved them all. How I had missed this gem I shall never know. I absolutely loved every second. Great characters, even the bar owner, and the promise of great sex in part two.

How I wish I could be Marie

Jules

Dommes are people too! So many of these stories put the Domme character as a monolithic personality. Grace is full rich nuanced and human. Her story is worth the journey of 10 chapters (yes I read them all and came back here to encourage any who wonder if it is a worthwhile endeavor, it is. Beautifully crafted, well worth the time spent exploring a new world.

I absolutely love this story. Although she is inexperienced, her true dominant nature takes over. I can see why Marie is so eager to submit to her!

I really enjoy your writing style. It puts me in the scenario so easily!

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