All Comments on 'The Hot Tub'

Why don't I have a sister like T? Jeez, after this story anyones sister would be great to have.

by far the best i read yet,thank you for th memories!keep them coming,cant get enuf of you style.you write from the hip or from memories?

thanks

Brilliant way to write a story..tease me to death..then come out with a fantastic ending that is sizzling hot!!! Bravo...more stories please.. just wondering if this is in anyway true to life?

another 2nd reading.. and just as hot as the 1st time.... great build up... hot hot ending.... doesn't really need any sequel really....

Your stories vary and they such fun to read. I cannot wait for your next installments!

Your stories are such a turn on for me because they allow me to re-live memories of times spent with my big brother! ;) LOVE IT! Please keep up the great work!

What a wonderful story!! Unfortunately it ended too soon, so I will have to reread it to relieve the ache in my groin. A pity Sophie didnt join in on the last night....maybe a future visit? Anyway, continue the great work.

I wish I had an older brother to comfort me like that..

Lets make it happen, while we can. Secret - spontanious erctions have a limited life span. Enjoy them while you can, they won't be around forever.

Mesmorising. Don't ever stop writing.

what happens next

does she leave her husband and temp move in with her brother and then her her brother hand his wife have a threesome? :)

Your work is great! The best I have read on Literotica.

Keep it up.

Cheers from Australia.

Really hot. I couldn't stop reading once I started.

best ever...

Though I'd left some (anonymous) feedback on "In Sara" saying as much, I finally registered for the site (finally wrote a story!) and wanted to pop in here and comment that--holy fuck--this story drives me absolutely insane. His relationship with Sophie is just as hot as his relationship with T, and the tension created is absolutely unbearable. So hot, so _bad_.

That's what i'm talking about!!! i do love me a good hot tub tale!

...the building passion in this story. It left me wanting more. What would/could they do now? How would Sophia fit in if they went to each other? Damn, please write another chapter or three! As always, a terrific story, well up to your usual quality. Thanks! Jim

i've read it non-stop from the begining, Superb!

Did they ever met again?

Killapy

I've been reading your stories for ages; this is probably the 4th time I've read this one, and I've read the rest at least 3 times each. You are without a doubt my favorite author on this site. Incredible stuff, the tension, the taboo; so hot, so... bad. You have an incredible talent.

Loved the build up, the story. Nicely written, not hurried, not cheapened by jumping right into sex. It left me waiting for the next page and wondering if I would have to wait for the next chapter to see T satisfied.

I loved this story just the way it is. It was incredibly hot that he could fantasize and pretend to be fucking his wife when he was pounding his wife. But, I know that I wouldn't want my brother's wife joining us---I'd want him all to myself.

Incest is so hot because of the secrecy and the forbidden aspect. Having his wife join in would spoil all of that.

My brother fucked me when I was very young. I'd love to fuck him again now, but I don't know how to make that happen. Maybe you could write a story like that. I know I'd love it.

give your pen name, I guess this is your own story. It was hot and very interesting to read a male perspective for female readers.

That's it, is there not any more? No resolution? It seems as though the story leaves you hanging... Is that on purpose? Or is the end just waiting to be written?

continue your story lol

you not only included the obvious physical aspec but the emotional

The story built up in intensity, the emotional and physical relationship portrayed very nicely. You touched on some themes when they finally made love I'd have liked to see continued in the ending. The end seemed abrupt for the kind of finished story you're so capable of!

Great start, I think the end was a little quick, maybe another extended week would help. Also getting Sophie involved, start with S & T spending time alone when Jack has to be gone for a few days, then let it play out from there to maybe a mutual threesome. Lot of ways to go with this, but keep it between the three. Don't turn it into another cheap Fuck story. Yes, before you ask, something very similar happened to me. Peace & Love to all.

Well, done, though, like the others, I would be remiss were I to fail to mention the jolt to my erotic imaginings brought on by the rather abrupt ending. Yup, T & Sophie need to become involved. Maybe Sophie mentions to him how aroused she became when she saw her naked the first time and it brought back memories of her childhood girlfriend and the way they played? Perhaps he mentions it to T when she calls him at work to thank him and she gets aroused as well, having had her own saphic relationship? You're a craftsman... if you wish to continue regaling us with the love between these three, you'll sort it out and reward our patience. Otherwise, thank you for what you've given us!

This story had a few problems with spelling but I was almost jerked into the story by the second page.. At the end My body was like mush. We need more and soon.

You simply have to contine this story. It's obvious T & her brother aren't going to be able to stay away from one another. It's like they have this primal need for one another. Regardless of what they want to do, or what they KNOW they should do, they will not tolerate separation. Could Sophie join in? Would they leave their spouses for one another? Please continue.

Loved it, it difintly could be continued.

I think Sophie wants to join in.

I really enjoy your stories. You are an excellent writer! My sister and I fooled around quite a bit when were kids, up until I had moved out and she went to college. So, your stories bring back a lot of memories. I particularly enjoyed this story as his wife was brought into it and was turned on by his lust for his sister. I finally told my wife about my sister and I last year. I was very cautious at first, but my wife was really turned on by it and wanted all of the details. Now, hearing about me and my sister is what turns on my wife the most (her orgasms are intense!). In fact, she told me recently that she would like to watch me have sex with my sister. I hope you follow up on the hot tub story some day as I'd like to read more about husbands and wives who have similar feelings/experiences to us and share those stories with my wife.

All brothers and sisters should experience such beautiful uninhibited love.

Deserves a second chapter

You poor sick bastards.

I don't often say this, but this is a story that definitely deserves to be expanded on. Some stories are so perfect that continuing them would be criminal; this story is so tantalizing that it would be criminal not to follow up.

... Now fulfilled! Delicious!

Love the way you write. Plenty of foreplay and teasing.

So sorry you haven't written for a while.

Hopefully you will publish another story again soon.

If you are looking for ideas, I would like to see something about taking his sister to the drive-in.

Awesome.e story would live to read more as there is so much more to this story that could happen

a 4 because of the ending. It wasn't a bad ending by any means but, it just didn't seem right. Just me I guess......

Loved it.

I'd suggest a sequel, with Sophie catching on and encouraging or joining in, however you haven't published on Literotica for more than 7 years, so I don't think it would happen.

Such a long story leading up to the expected end in about three sentences. Could have been better

I don’t believe Sophie wouldn’t have awakened and caught them. Also, it sounded like Jack and Sophie already had very satisfying and amazing sex life. How stupid is it to jeopardize that and their relationship for a few minutes of illicit pleasure. Do people do that in real life? Yes, we have a name for them. DIVORCED!

How about if the sister and her husband get divorced and Sophie asks her to come stay with them knowing full well what happened that that night.

I know this story has been out here for a long time. SO I guess no more story is going to be added? Bummer. Worse yet there is no proof YOU are still around. You are the master craftsman, who makes it all happen.!

And whenever you wrote this you were in top form. This story is top 10 , no doubt, and Old Al has read hundreds and likely thousands of stories. So, stop and think a moment where that puts you and your talents!

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