All Comments on 'The Gift Exchange'

Got so bored i only got a 1/3 way down tbe page!

Rubbish.

You should warn of gay content

You got the names mixed up a few times and it did not make sense.

Rubbish!

Needed a hint of an ending.

You should have probably put this in Humor & Satire, as it's entirely too stupid to be taken as a serious story.

Kind of funny but strange

Needs to be more ecplicit No imagination! It is not up the readers too

Missed the punchline. Poor finish

Nice! A couple of April Fools reversed surprises that turned out better than right in the end. Very creative thinking! 5 stars

WTF... One of the dumbest storylines ever, not even funny. We are the FOOLS for reading this sad and pathetic April fool's day tale of two sorry individuals who, supposedly, love each other but want to open up their marriage, I guess. Boring couple who are looking to "spice" up their sex lives, no real communication

or honesty between them... I gave it one star because I hated it.

Ugh! Puke!

Waste of time

Cute, but not my cuppa.

Hopefully this is the first and last story you write.

I drank a half gallon of Wild Turkey and reread it and I still have no idea what the hell it's about or what's going on.

Too obtuse, though very, very well-written. As we used to tell "criminal masterminds" when we did prison counselling sessions: "Turn your mind, your creativity and skill to something that decent."

Not funny at all. More like …. dumb.

Captcha

Better ending—

Brett: How was your night?

Wife: Incredible in every way, not what I expected, that’s for sure. How about yours?

Brett: Definitely not what I expected from you, and not what I would call a gift, that’s for sure. Gifts aren’t supposed to be work, and now I’ve got a body to move and a big hole to dig in the back yard! Getting a divorce attorney can wait until Monday, I guess.

Wrong category, you're going to get savaged! LW is the deep end of the pool.

Good story,very silly wound wants my money back. Great April fools sorry, everyone else needs to lighten up

Use some fucking tags,

Definitely not my taste. How did you get from a married couple that is planning on having kids to their gifts to each other is an escort with a Hall Pass? Then you switch it from hetero to homosexual sex. I think you forgot the humor, and this piece morphed into a complete piece of trash.

Pathetic and weird story to think both of the couple think of and apparently agree the even weirder turn of events???

Not for us and wasted our time.

Good fun story. Ha. I was a fun read. 4stars

Love it, glad they were both open -minded!

First story!

4

Since when is April Fools day a Holiday?…..although with characters like these every day must be a fools day.

You can’t leave us hanging like that man! We need a part 2 of the details!

You lost the narrative

Yeah, saw that coming.

What are they gonna do on Columbus Day or mayday or during secretary week ? No really that was an amusing and fun read !

Nothing says Happy Anniversary like his and hers whores.

Fantastic story!!!! Please, share with us what happened in each room in detail ;)

LAME!

At least no one ended up pregnant. Well, time will tell about Brett. After all, Brad is quite a virile man.

Ha Ha......not funny. How would you like to wake up with a raw asshole!

HAHA