All Comments on 'The Game'

Nice pace, good imagination, well writen. I'm hard! Thanks for the nice jerk off.

Are they the same Sara & Jason from the Cartrip? Probably not....I like How you are writing from the girl POV...fresh approach and it's almost as if it doesn't really matter which.

You write like I always imagined lovemaking was supposed to be like but I never quite managed to make everything fit. I don't know if I'm more jealous of your writing-ability or your sexual escapades! I mean seriously, Dude, who are you? I'll tell you who you are; The guy that is ruining me for everyone else by way of fantasy. But I'm not complaining...anyway please do write more about them. I'd like some back-story to "the deal" so until then I'm gonna read the Pearl again, It's been a while.

even with a short stor, you still manage to tease and build up your story. that was an amazing quickie! looking forward for more!

Way up there with all your great stories.

wish i had had a hot sister take care of me like this. great story

lucky beggar so he is!

Love the Self Talk

Hot

Good story..too bad theere isn't a follow up story/chapter now that sisteers' passsions for sex with brother has been ignited!