All Comments on 'The Elevator Shaft'

by Maskscara

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Paul4playPaul4play10 months ago

Oh wow!

I want to get stuck on the elevator with you!

MigbirdMigbird9 months ago

Although stopped elevator scene not original (what is under the sun), the anonymity and crisp pace perfect for the quick sex. At least for me, although all the right phrases/words are there his seduction of her does not elicit as passion/intensity as expected; her reciprocation better.

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