All Comments on 'The Circle Ch. 21'

I really like this story. It is mostly well-written, grammar-wise, although I am a bit puzzled about it being sometimes narrative and sometimes "first person perspective". The sex scenes are a bit staid, I felt - but contribute to the story overall without taking over. I see this story as a "life-style narrative with some spice added for zest". :) A barn-burner it's not - it is a nice story, and one I immensely enjoyed reading. Thank-you! :)