All Comments on 'The Breakfast Conversation'

Keep up the good work.

Very good story, interested to see where this story goes

Incredibly hot in every way. Love the subtle femdom/CFNM aspect that while Stevie is totally exposed, the ladies only go braless, and that this arrangement is to continue. The slight power imbalance makes this already great story that much better. Will watch eagerly for a sequel or any other contributions by you in the future.

More please!

the thing I love mist about incest stories is the long, slow build up that leads the characters to cross the uncrossable line, and this story had great build up.

well done.

This was very well done. Amazingly well written and a fantastic fantasy.

-heyall

Mmmmm simply lovely....thank you Paige

This was one of the most erotic stories I've ever read and definitely the best of 2015 so far! Keep up the good work! You have amazing detail when you write and your pacing is amazing: you don't jump right into the sex but it gradually gets more arousing as the story moves on which is able to the keep the reader interested without abruptly coming to an end. Again, teriffic!

What an excellent writer you are. The story is one of the best incest stories I've read. Nice to not have a dominator figure. Just pure slow burning lust; had me hot. I can't wait for your next erotic story.

Where do they go from here? She has to go to work, but what happens when she gets home? The next morning? There are still so many lines to cross! Well done

So hot! Great story, want more!

but he seems to be the most mature.

His "older" sister must be 20ish, and their mother 39, but they sound like 12 year olds. In fact the whole scenario sounds like the kind of conversation you might hear in middle school.

Really looking forward to know how she went to the work and the reaction.

Its so hot that without actual sex you had made it. Kudos to you and best wishes for the future works. Keep it hot

That was one amazing sexy story!! would there be a part 2? thanks

I must tell you, I am 71 and I might have been able to match that 45 years ago!

When will chapter #2 Be Ready?

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Loved the story. Looking forward to more of your work.

What a playfully fun story of family sex. More please :-)

Quite simply the most amazing incest story that I've read on this site in quite a while!

Well written and had a nice buildup. I'm happy to add you to my list of favorite authors. Keep up the great work and I hope to read more from you soon! Thanks for your submission.

Loved the way you set up the scene and describe the interplay between the mother and her two children. I can never look at my yogurt container the same way in the future

Venus

I enjoyed your story...and hope there is a part 2. I am curious about the rumors surrounding the reporter. Can you give more information on that? Obviously not her name but perhaps details.

definitely need a part 2 to the story, love it

PaigeLynne, your initial story here on Literotica is absolutely incredible! I had to take the batteries out of my smoke alarm because your incestuously lusty tale set it off! I couldn't get this to my Favorites fast enough.

I imagined Julie Banderas as Mom, Andrea Tantaros as Sis/Daughter, and me as Son/Brother. ;)

I wish I could give more than 5 stars.

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you all for your lovely messages of encouragement for a nervous first time writer. I was uncertain how people would view my story, since it was filled with the ultimate taboo for a single mom. I plan to write more and maybe there is more to tell about Erin and her kids. For those curious about my inspiration, just search around the web a bit, maybe you can still find the rumors online, but most was just small talk that came out afterwards. You would be surprised what happens at small local television stations. -- PL

you seriously need a part 2 3 4 5 and so on and so forth .I read this twice and came so many times .

great story. if you add more it would be nice to read that they all take it to the ultimate conclusion - all of them having sex on the breakfast table! mom & daughter 69 as son takes mom from behind! I didn't hear of any of this here in UK, but my mind is stretching the story to include a visit from some of mom's co-workers - hot weather babes & a couple of fit producer guys - to make a bit of an orgy! that's how i'd do it anyway!!

Loved it

cant waite for part 2

Absolutely loved it. Hopefully there will be a followup chapter so we can see how he takes care of his mother and sister.

Gave a 4

5Stars, best yet. You make the reader feel like they are part of it. Hope you send more.

i really enjoyed this. Hope you will write more stories.

Really enjoyed your story! Hope to see more from you! 5 stars!

I do hope we'll see what happens at breakfast the next day - or after supper that night! Blow jobs are fine, but they need to fuck to consumate their incestual relationship.

Good writing, but as a first-timer you need to get an editor or someone to proofread it, as there were a few mistakes.

I'm looking forward to your future submissions.

Dick

liked the story hope you have more spread it out to her show would definite be great keep up the great work

This was a very good story for me. I cant wait to read about the next stage and I think the next chapter should involve some serious cum and fucking, it will be interesting to see how mom and daughter will share that piece of meat.

I loved your story. It was so sexy with out feeling rushed. I am looking forward to your next chapter or your next story. It was one of the best I have read.

... there is a second chapter in the offing. Can't imagine mother not wanting to have her son's beautiful cock deep inside her pussy and possibly ass!

What a great story. I really hope there's more to come.

......this is truly the tip of the iceberg! Now they need to take the next step...SOON!!!!!

Looking forward to seeing more writing from you.

absolutely fantastic, story. would have given 7stars!!!!!!!!!!!

That is the best story ever! I wish I was Stevie!

I loved the feeling of my cock moving in my pants while reading this story. I can't wait to get alone so I can relieve myself.

Thanks

forward to reading more of your stuff. It was a well-imagined scene. I do have one suggestion; the dialogue is often stilted. For example, "Oh god, mom, you look so beautiful right now, doesn't she sis? I love that I can see your breasts and hard nipples." doesn't sound like something a teenage boy whose anchorwoman Mom is eating his cum. How about, "Hey sis, check out Mom's tits; her nipple are hard."

I have one word to say. Wow

Wow that was one of the hottest stories ever. I just shot cum all over my chest. Please write more. So fucking hot.

A really good story for anyone with an exaggerated cum fetish. I think a little more background on what made these kids so sheltered would have helped. They seemed exceptionally innocent. But with that said, I gave a 5

It is very well-written. If I could make a criticism, it would be that everything happened so quickly that it seems impossible to believe. Had the events stretched out over several days, the change from not accepting the word cum to eating it would have been more plausible.

great story you should think about writing a sequel to this one I know anyone whose read this will love to see future works of yours

Really loved the story. Actually just signed up to comment on it even though I've been browsing Literotica for years and have never felt the need. That's how much I enjoyed it.

As some others have said my one criticism would be it all progressed a bit too fast. More hesitation and unease as things escalated would have really put the story over the top. But it's a minor issue in an otherwise fantastic story.

I hope you continue this story and write more like. This kind of innocent explorations is one my favorite premises along with forced contact leading to incest like 'Sitting on My Son's Lap,' or slight coercion incest like 'Persuading Shy Mom to Pose,' as well as medical excuses like 'How Do You Spell Relief' or "Measuring My Cum.' Really I just hope you write more because you're pretty damn good.

Very hot. I hope this is not your only entry on Literotica. I loved the way you followed the Mom's increasing sexual arousal. This one screams for part two -- I'd like to follow this family's full descent into incestual bliss as big-cocked son satisfies bit-titted sister and Mom -- although I'd read anything you posted. The Mom being a news anchor adds so many possibilities for unique imaginative sex scenes or something simple, like reading the news on air as her son's cum seeping from her vagina. Hope to see something new someday.

It get better each time I read it. Please continue.

I read your story a few months back and just read it again. I think it was hotter the second time. What a wonderful erotic setup that I know a few single mums would love to read, I know I did even though the topic is usually taboo for me. I was a bit red faced this morning when my son came down to breakfast and your story was still fresh on my mind. I hope you will write some more.

Thank you. This is one of the hottest mom incest stories I have read here for quite some time. Who knew family breakfasts could be so naughty. Great buildup and playful fun with a mom and her potent son and daughter. Newscasts are never going to be the same for me now when I try to guess which newsbabe the rumors were about...wow!

Wow, it is really great to see another talented woman writer in the incest category. I loved your story and hope you continue to share such wicked tales. From one mother to another, I have to tell you that whether this story was based on rumors or just your fantasy, it was very hot and smoldering. I will be watching for more from you! Thanks.

The pacing of this story makes it all so hot! What mother would not love to be in her place.

I would love to know more about this newsbabe hotty and her son.

Loved It!

Thank You!

Love this story must read parts of it at least once a week. Please write a squeal. You have a real talent. Thanks for this amazing story

GOOD COMBINATION - MORE TO THIS THEME THANKS!

PLEASE come back and write another chapter or 4.

Please add more chapters

Great START! Making mom and sis a little slutty and subservient over time could work nicely to continue the story.

I do hope you add more to this tale of family loving.

A great first effort. Hope their are many more to come

This is a reasonably well written story that manages to generate some heat. Unfortunately, it suffers from unrealistic dialog and characters; in particular, the "children". Their dialog is unrealistic for someone their age, and their naiveté borders on the inane (part of me wondered if they were both mentally deficient).

Then, there is the clichéd use of the word "Mommy". Ugh. It is one thing to intentionally use it in a playful, sexy way. But when used as a normal part of conversation by adults, it comes across as something obviously manufactured by the author... which it is. It's supposed to titillate, or be provocative. In reality, it serves as a reminder that the author really wants the kids to be a lot younger. Pretty creepy.

Finally, there is Mom. She's a bombshell newsanchor. A woman who's job exposes her to lots of uncomfortable subjects; everything from multiple muders, child porn, serial rapists, etc. And we are supposed to believe that this woman, who is referred to as the "sexy librarian", struggles with sexual terms in front of her kids?!? It's not that I'm not buying it, it's that you can't sell it.

I liked the concept, and the writing, at least in terms of it's grammar and flow. But the actual execution leaves a lot to be desired.

This is one of my favourite stories. Any who chomp you out for realism are being unfair and you should ignore their criticisms. These stories are written to evoke fetishes (which you did amazingly), not be graded on their scientific validity. You should continue to write. I know there are many who are excited for more submissions. Come back!

Give us more information on which news babe was caught with her son?

Please continue writing about this family.

Please write a part 2. This is a great story. I loved it.

This was an excellent story and very creative use of son's cock by his mum and older sister. We need to see more of this family!

Great write. Nice slow build. Needs to be followed up.

Best story of its theme on Literotica. Love how the mom is really the one driving the seduction forward even though she does not realize she wants her boy's penis between her lips until it served to her by his sister. Hot!

You realise that now he's cum all over them the next thing he'll want to do is fuck them both?

loved it

Great build up, I love how the mom slowly is drawn in to the forbidden act!

What a way to start a day - with a breakfast conversation.

Mother, daughter and son " bonded" big time.

Great Story! Hopefully there will be more in the future.

Keep up the great work....

Great story.

Like the build up,personally would have liked the use of the language to have lasted longer , maybe with the kids adding to it as the conversation went on until they were talking talking to each other.

A very well written story, overall. Sex scenes were well written, so much so that I felt like I was in the room with them. Only thing I'd have done different is get the gals nude too. Maybe next time. And maybe dad joins in.

Beautiful story with hot buildup as mom discovers a love of son’s cock. Love the pacing and language as the story moves to its explosive ending. Great to see women authors exploring this taboo topic!

wow, loved it,,well written. well paced,,build up was right there in my minds eye, familial love is my fav kink. i hope to see more like this.

Great build up of mom’s increasing desire for son’s penis. This mother will never think of breakfast the same way! I love female writers willing to push the limits with such themes.

Sad to see this is your only story. I would love a second chapter and more stories from you. You have a talent. Thank you.

Agreed. An exceptional writer and I also was sad to see only one story. Thank you for the story.

Well written, highly erotica, perhaps too much pre-cum and no follow through (THEN what happened?), but overall a real gem. Thanks to PaigeLynn who should write a lot more.

loved it. more?