by eidetic
Great story, characters. - I liked the danger aspect of it. Epilogue is a nice happy ending...if one likes happy endings...
that was without a doubt the best literotica story i've ever read, so awesome i made an account so i could properly comment
Love the balance of imagination and fun, very other-worldly characters and normal life. The story left me fulfilled too, that's hard to beat!
A wonderful story. Well conceived and executed. Shivers run down my spine.