All Comments on 'The Best Gift of All'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing

This was awesome please continue this story

Gebob69Gebob69over 11 years ago
Love your Story...★★★★★

You are one of my favorite writers. I hope you continue this story but if not it was great. Can't wait to read more from you. You are a 5 star author ☆★☆★☆

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
A wonderfully written erotic and loving story. Five stars isn't enough

A perfect ending to a very loving and hot story.

Thanks for the great read.

LAROCLAROCover 11 years ago
BRAVO BELLA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OUTSTANDING STORY, YOU DID NOT MISS A BEAT. ALL IN ALL I GUESS ALLEN WAS AN ASSHOLE. TO PASS ON A WOMAN LIKE LIZ. GOOD THINGS DO HAPPEN, AND THAT DAY IT HAPPEN FOR PAUL.MOST OF YOUR STORIES HAVE BEEN GOOD, BUT THIS ONE IS YOUR BEST. KEEP YOUR STORIES COMING, THEY SEEM TO BE THE LIGHT AT THE END OF THE TUNNEL. THANK YOU...........PS..... A PART TWO WOULD BE NICE, THEY HAVE JUST GOTTEN STARTED..................LAROC OF AGES

msoulmsoulover 11 years ago
Hot Hott Hottt

Now this is an incest story that capture the heat!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MORE

I didn't want this story to end!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Please continue ....... must have more....need part 2, part 3,, part 4, ect...... pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Once Again.

As usual you have outdone yourself once again.We're hoping for a second chapter of course.Keep up the good work Brett. Ciao and good luck. Joe

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MISSES THE MARK AND BORING

So poorly written as to be considered a formula piece. You can do better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved it.

What a hot mother/son story. I really liked that she put on some sexy black stocking before making love to her son and he got to fill her womb with his seed. Please write more chapters with mum in stockings and heels.

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 11 years ago
Awesome

I think it was fairly realistic, has a good rhythm. Just wish it was longer.

kathy2b46kathy2b46over 11 years ago
great

i loved so real to life, a turn on to any mom that has a son like that and also to a son that has a mom like her

so hot and wonderful they can enjoy the sex together

Morlan502Morlan502over 11 years ago
Oh Yes!

I do enjoy a good mother-son incest story, and you sort of hint that she might just get preggo, like icing on the cake for my imagination! SO Taboo!

Hope to see some additional chapters!

"Liz screamed so hard that Paul was sure the chandelier in the room shook. Her body contracted around his cock as her orgasm came over her like a tidal wave. He allowed himself to follow suit, not worrying that they hadn't used protection. He knew she had taken precautions with Allen in the past."

Super! And my guess is she knew what she was doing from the get-go on the protection issue.

Isn't the imagination a fun tool to play with?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Should be longer!

Great erotic, sensual story, very exciting to read, far too short; more chapters, please, soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Slam bam with no build-up

Party had setting for a nice erotic build-up over the dancing etc. but ended up being pretty abrupt & too quick to get to the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very intense

my mum never dressed up for me but used to get into my bed when dad worked away,i was a teenager and the inevitable happened with me releasing a load into mum and she got pregnant with my child.dad thought that it was his and so the secret has now gone to the grave.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
an excellent story of hot motherfucking!

This author never disappoints. It's so great when a boy introduces his big stiff prick to his mother's cunt. In my opinion, a mother's cunt is the receptacle nature provides for her boy's hard on and all the rich warm semen he's got in his hot young balls. His mother's cunt is where a boy's potent sperm belongs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Many parts are great.........

but you left out the entry. That is one the best parts of a mom-son story.

EloboEloboabout 11 years ago
WHAT HAPPENED TO THE REST OF THE STORY??

Story ended too abruptly, like someone walked in & he had to end the story. Kind of like Coitus Interruptus!!

sorcerer221sorcerer221over 10 years ago
More please.....

Agreed with the rest. Story end too sudden, never truly give account of what actually to the Mother and Son.

I'm a supporter of your story and this one is something like "wham, bam thank you..... ". Hope there is a chapter 2 to detail out the account.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 10 years ago

The story and the sex was good but I wish you had described their bodies better. I like to have that visual in my head while I read a story.

BoppaBoppaover 9 years ago
Great story, but...

It was too short! I don't need a complete book, but this was a great story that deserves more lead-up, and definitely a much less abrupt ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very nice story

But very unfinished...

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Even Better

The second time around. I've been reading your stories all over again and still can't put them down.

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