All Comments on 'Tannah The Whore Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
introduction needed

The writing by the author is very well done, but this chapter needs a more detailed introduction, to let the reader know more about the main character, her background, her thoughts, feelings, etc. The sex scenes are excellent, albeit a little too brief at the climaxes. On the whole, excellent work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very well written and absolutely fascinating.

Tess (uk)

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