All Comments on 'Summer of Discovery Ch. 01'

Please let me know if you'd like me to continue this story.

looks good

yes, continue. I'm looking forward to their journey of discovery.

Perfectly written, even the style of writing/story is suspense/discovery.

I like the setup of the story but things just seem to be moving wayyyy too quickly to seem realistic. I feel their first encounter would have been better if stretched into a couple more pages with the sexual bit gradually building up. But hey you are the author so its your vision. Please continue.

I appreciate the feedback. Chapter 2 is already submitted. As an FYI, chapter 2 is almost exclusively character development.

Thank you. I definitely understand why you feel that way. I wanted it to be a sudden event that neither party expected or prepared for. The next chapter is how they deal with it. It definitely slows down. But I will remember to keep it as realistic as possible.

This is every teen's fantasy - come to life. I'm looking forward to reading the rest in this series.