All Comments on 'Summer Lovin' Gang Bang'

thanks everyone!!!!

The sex was too delayed... A whole Lotta fluff, I almost stopped reading when it stated feeling like an actual lecture but I'm glad I continued...

Only 8 or 9 paragraphs into the story there is a sexual assault in the public swimming pool. That established the girl's nature was to be a victim. Not quick enough? Then she is assaulted on the cable car by two creeps. Maybe too much background detail but I was trying for development so the protagonist is well known to the reader when the gang bang starts and that is the center of the pie, and well detailed. Thanks for your comment, I understand that sometimes we like to cut right to the center for the good stuff.

who took the time to read this story--THANKS!

Loved the build up, loved the story, loved the ending.

We all like different things and this was a story I thoroughly enjoyed.

Thank you

Gave you 5 stars because you write incredibly well. I did feel the sex part ẁas flat, for my tastes. Lots of build up with little hot payoff IMO. Still I'm going to look at your other stories.

kirstymia - thank you for reading, what a lovely name!

merrySM - the sex was flat? How so? If you're looking for SM the story was not headed there. I'll try to give you a taste in the Geek Pride event coming in a few days. I would like to know your definition of SM? Thanks for your comment.