by dweaver999
I forgot to mention, the web site I mentioned in the story, Kaya\\\'s Kinky Krafts, is real. If you want to know how to get there, send me a private comment and I\\\'ll send you the URL.
This was one of the hottest stories I've read in a long time, I look forward to reading more!
i love how you entwine all of the varying instances od domination and submission. of course with my favorite being the domination of Charles over Valerie. i look forward to reading the next part of the chapter. and i was thrilled to see Kaya's Kinky Krafts mentioned. i read her blog regularly and enjoy it so much. thank you again for sharing your talents.
i've been waiting for this....well done...i love their story...please never stop
piece of shits cum made me want to vomit-Anyone sho thinks that a REAL MAN would need to be called MASTER is as sick as the author
It was worth the wait! I love your stories and the plot you take so much time to write. Thank you for another wonderful addition!
The wait was worth it, this story is a very good read and I look forward to each installment.
i was so excited when i saw a new story and as always I was not disappointed. please continue!
well written and a powerful argument for Safe, Sane, and Consensual sex. The expository paragraphs could get a bit wordy but - you are handling them in the manner of a real conversation; a good trick and well done.
But the 'rating' stars ain't working so I can't give the story the '5' that it deserves.