All Comments on 'Start of the Best Vacation Ever'

Sorry, the back and forth story telling was annoying.

Come on WillieMac, a kilometer is 0.68 miles! Just how long are her legs. The second paragraph ended it for me.

The suspense is killing me.

I liked it. It was different. I wasn't at all confused and the kilometer thing, well, sorry the poor fellow took it literally.

MichaelG

great story so far love to see the rest of the vacation soon. sounds exciting

and still have no idea what is going on.

I enjoyed it, but was at no point aroused by it. This was trying too hard to be naturally sensual (much like present day J-Lo ). Kudos, if the author designed the narrative that way on purpose. So Montenegro is actually nice in August ?