All Comments on 'Spinal Meningitis is No Joke Ch. 09'

Hope for more A.S.A.P.

The longer the series goes, the more it risks sinking into the usual “I fucked her and her and her” repetition that ruins most long series. The only way to avoid the trap is to tighten up the storyline and progress to the end.

Really want to see more of Beth, and of him helping her heal. Not just him fucking Beth, Leanne, the mom, the nurses and everyone else. I also hope to see why Beth is so emotionally damaged and her progress of getting passed it.

I truly am enjoying this story so far and don't want it to devolve to random thoughtless and loveless fucking that I've seen in many stories on here. When the story line falls apart it's often made up with fucking every girl they meet and the more women you add the harder it will be to balance.

To me at least the best part of the Incest/Taboo category is the intimacy/love and so far you've a great job of showing how much they love each other.

Leanne's high school boyfriend is named Steve

Beth's ex is named Steve

Jeannie's husband is named Steve

Patient in the Coma ward is named Steve

Come on, you must know more men's first names than fucking Steve. If you came one more person Steve, I'm gonna find you and throw rotten fruit at you like they do in the cartoons.

great series but getting repetitive. needs some new female characters discovering him

First, Beth has to catch Josh fucking their mom by the pool possibly alongside Lynne.

Second, mom has to spill the beans about everything.

Third a 3 on 1 or a threeway featuring Josh, Beth and mom with the possible addition of Lynne needs to happen as they eat each other.

Fourth, inviting Josh's coma nurses over for an orgy is needed as incestuous sex and sex with your patients are both taboos these women have at least broken once.

Fifth, Beth needs to seduce the dad into incestuous father-daughter sex when he gets home in order to allow her and her mom to fuck Josh openly around the house. Possibly with them being caught by Josh and the mom who then at the mom's urging has Josh fuck her asshole in front of her husband while he has his cock stuck inside Beth's pussy. "As long as fucking is done between them or with the kids it isn't cheating."

Sixth, something has to be done with Beth's latest secret boyfriend, either he turns out to be a good guy or a total douche bag.

Overall the story is very good. Gets confusing when you go from Leanne to Lynne in some parts, but it is a good read.

Too many Steve's, may want to consider revising for Jeannie a different name. I can see Steve in Leanne and Beth's case as they are best friends and may have shared said Steve at one point

More adventures with the Coma nurses would be nice.

Is this story still ongoing? Id love to see a chapter 10!

Have very much enjoyed your writing.

Like how it has moved around, and the different relationship you are building with the mother and Beth.

Have left out the 4 nurses for awhile now wondering when you may bring them back unto the mix

Keep it up!!

I have no idea why you decided to include the Mom in this. She is totally unnecessary and it makes Josh look like a dick .. l’m actually hoping at this point that he’s still in that coma or dead ...

still just a matter of time till you get too many women involved, the cast you have now would exhaust a football team. ;)

So, you've introduced yet another cuck to the background cast... not a fave of mine, though with Leanne's description of Beth's bf choices, it's probably Jeannie's husband :D

No idea if you are trying to tell a story anymore, it seems to have become a series of sexual encounters... I'm running out of interest beyond the (hot) smut with every available hole.

I like the mom the most, this is great

Can't he be a total stud with morals?? No fucking married women!!!!

This continues to surprise and please me to no end!! And, the naysayers about how the story develops be damned!!

Mom...she was his from when he woke up in the hospital...already knew about the nurses and their fun!! Plus, she is going to arrange for Jeannie to be back in the picture.

The other nurses...never far from the action...just working out the logistics for each of them...they all love him, and will rejoin shortly, I am sure!!

Beth is Beth...his sister...she realizes her current boyfriend is also a 'mistake' for her, and that Josh is the man for her. Going into his room and fucking him so loudly that Mom was woken up...YEAH, SHE HAS IT BBBAAADDD!! And is gonna keep on that way!

Leeanne...hhhmmm...she has it bad, too; she is good for Josh, being his long-time crush that finally happens. She is also looking out for him, even while being paid by insurance company to "rehab" him!!

This is a "HAREM" STORY...let it be one, y'all!! It is gonna go as it will...AND IT IS GONNA BE MAGNIFICENT, just wait and see!

Five**5**Stars...deserves a constellation...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌

I feel a bit bad for the father. He seems like a good Dad, a reliable provider and a faithful husband who is still satisfying his wife when he is at home. Just because he doesn't like anal he is getting cucked by his son.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!